by the way, this would HAVE to be printed on brown. it looks so smooth.

omg awesome, deff. a lot better, creates great eye movement now!

This shirt is definitely eye candy. Lovely use of colors.

Much better resub. I must go fly a kite now.

Very nice. I really like it on the chocolate shirt.

I actually like the khaki shirt, though the brown is good. Can I say I love the way you presented this. Very nice.

Now back to the office to live this image...

actually, i really like it with the kite string curved like in the girls example! great work :)

This shirt would look hot on a woman. Not so great for a guy because we're eithervery flat or a little big in the tummy (wrong place for emphasis on us in both cases).

Still, I have to give a 5-- it's a great idea and it would make a great T for a lady.

I prefer the curving string. The curve seems more playful. The taught string looks rigid and hardly contrasting from the "rigid" work environment

Love it!!!!!!!

i would buy this is a heartbeat. i'm not even kidding.

awesome job! 5 + buy

umm, i think(and I could be wrong here), that the string in the girls design is supposed to be contouring with the girls pose. It's drawn to look like it would on a shirt, with someone wearing it, standing like that. I do agree that the curving one looks nice, but I don't think it was intentional. Artist, what say ye?

i wish the office space were a more linear design. not huge on the curlies either, or at least not so many. still an awesome shirt, though. i totally understand the feeling, too.

I like this, but not with the roof.

cute.

i do like...

Dark brown = awesome.

it probably isn't necessary to make the string curve, since it will curve naturally when you wear the shirt. :)

nice job.

oh dear this is AMAZING

Yes, much better this time. 5 and buy.

i don't leave comments but i have found true love.

Love the colors and the design. Amazing!

ooooooooh i adore it! adore! adore! adore!

i love this.

You've presented this so nicely...I think I want a shirt with the entire image, figures and all!

I know the string only looks like it would curve on the girl's shirt, but I think it really should curve a bit. It would be the finishing touch to an otherwise perfect design. Love it.

please tell me this is getting printed cuz i want it so bad so amazing dude

like it!

this needs to be printed so badly

i would like it if it was just kite and no building. its really pretty color. i like the pink on the brown