the stuff with the birds reminds me of some conceptual piece by John Salvest, this bozo in my art gallery. but i like the design. i'm not the type to spend money, but if i was, i would probably consider buying it.
While I wasn't aiming for perfectly smooth lines, or realism, I realize that people expect that, so the design will suffer. It's hard to please people, dang.
It's a better design once it's explained, but it looks like the cone of light isn't coming from the torch as it converges and meets too soon. Plus the silhouettes look like beans or something, or bits of earwax. Plus the hand doesn't look real. However if these minor things were polished up this would be something i'd buy, which is rare.
i really hate explaining myself, but everyone keeps saying the same thing and it's annoying. I just want to add that I didn't really want the silhouettes to be readily recognizable, because it is about a person who is having trouble thinking of ideas. They aren't totally formulated yet. Again, though, it's obvious that more people would like it better if it were a clear image. Anyway, if you don't have anything new to say then don't put anything.
About my design