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i like i like... destruction is fun!
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truer words have never been spoken. hammer or whatever it is seems too short (maybe just me), but a way cool concept. i'd buy.
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Yeah make it a bigger hammer, it'll be a better representation of destruction. You could also add a big crack like the shirt is the wall he's knocking down. And put an exclamation point. It'll have more energy.
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I mean an exclamation point at the end of your sentence, btw.
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That's, like, the Hammer of the Working Class.
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Very cool concept, like Grahm Greene's "The Destructors."
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i really don't like it at all
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the font ruins this design i think.
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OMG the text is hideous.
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uh, i think the text is supposed to be ugly, to go along with the whole destruction thing. i love it as is.
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I agree the hammer needs to be larger, but it also needs to re done. It doesnt go with the man. It looks odd and out of place. Good concept. I am not really wild about the choice of fonts either.
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the whole guy looks out of place
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the man seems to be macho. overall, nice printing.
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If you actually drew/wrote the words, instead of using different fonts it might work.
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good concept. bad execution. need to work on your lineweight, and font decisions.
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good idea, just not feeling the writing. as people said before, some cracks down would be cool, like he's breaking the shirt or some such.
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text is good, the guy is bad
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understand the concept, but the man and the words do not go well together. dun think it will look nice as a shirt.
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I like this concept, as well as the crack and bigger hammer ideas. Not the exclamation point idea though, it looks better with a period because it comes off as a bold, true statement. Where as an exclamation point would make it look corny, like a school poster.
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read "a clockwork orange" that's the premis (however you spell that)
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yikes. you must be joking me. sorryto say it but it's absolutely horrible. basic, bad illustration, shockingly bad text/font and lame placement on the shirt.
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illustration isn't the most glamorous, but glamour wouldn't make sense on a shirt about destruction. this style and execution is perfect for the message. it has the whole gritty aspect without being too busy. bravo! i'd buy.
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i agree with toreador, nothing is fancy, but it all goes really well with the subject matter.
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slaterock on Apr 14 '05 I love how people put words into designers' mouths. Why doesn't anyone ask the designer if the graphic is meant to look "gritty", or not so good, and whether or not the text was "intentional"?
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I agree with the others who said the hammer was too small. Just make it a little bigger, and you've made this shirt even more fabulous! 5
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please destroy the shirt
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give that fellow a little more detail...
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