yeah, tight illustration, but the overall visual goodness is cut in half by that huge text. I think what you should do is keep the text but actually make it into a record visually rather than just hinting at it, that would be really sweet and a really solid way to integrate the text. Just my opinion though.
emm...perhaps you guys are right ...perhaps the figure itself should be clearer with the text back far or not even there...
i did try to surface some blue note records memorabillia perhaps too fast too bad...
but that's the think it's supposed to resemble a record...
thanks for the helpul feedback...:)
i love it, I'd just center the graphic rather than making it a 'pocket' style graphic. I love the type, people on this site seem to hate type, but it works to me.
music is always a saviour...
who designs in silence?