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 Best zoom I could do since I dont have Macromedia.
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Yeah,great design. Too big maybe. 4
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-adores samurai action- I wanna buy it now. t__t
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I always wondered if a 'sequential' design would fly on this website. This is cool, it gets my vote.
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Only wierdness I have with this is that the first image of the person on the right looks as though they are looking away from the other person and perhaps walking away. This is probably just because of the shape of the hair, but it's a little confusing. Still, awesome, 4.
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pretty good execution! I love the pose of the samurai on the right in the first frame. I'm glad you made it vertical, so much easier on the eyes. you need to clean those borders up, though. the shape of them is alright but the quality is screwy.
not sure if I would buy this or not but I have a couple of friends who I know would be interested. :D |
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great design! 5
personally, i think this would be even better if both warriors had been fatally wounded and were dead in the last panel. I know its not your intent with this design, but it could add a little humor and just a touch of irony also... you have enough colors to print the blood, so lets see this on some other colors. some darker color (a blue maybe) could make the blood really pop |
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amazing, I want to buy it now.
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So awesome.
so so awesome. 5 |
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Reminds me of the 5-point-fingertip-exploding-heart killing technique of KillBill.
Man takes 5 steps after applying the technique before he dies. |
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cool!
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oooh. ibndacabbie is right! here's another vote for making both warriors die.
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Suhi!!
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I didnt think about making both of the warriors wounded or dead. Ill redesign a 2nd version with something along those lines. Maybe something with more colors too. In one design , I had the dead warrior get decapitated , and get cut in half in another.
The design didnt look bad on the royal blue shirt either. Ill definately touch up the borders. Any comment on whether or not I should have the borders as rectangles instead of being slanted? |
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slanted. :D
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love it
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love!
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i like it.
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fresh
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like it...
designer's blues though...? |
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I really like it! I'd try experimenting with different 5th panels.
It could be another frame of the guy with his injury not being apparent, and the last frame will be him dying or dead. It could be a dramatic touch to have the winner sheath their sword in the last frame, but its a tad cliche |
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Its alright, too many frames.
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I like the design, but I agree that there are too many frames. Maybe the first one could be removed, then it would immediately start on the dramatic action frame of the two running at eachother. Having an odd number of frames (five instead of six) would probably work better. Nice.
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BTW, as far as previous comments are concerned, I like the slanted boxes and the decapitated head might be cool to see too.
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really like it, looks top notch on the red T. 5
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Wow this is wonderful. However, I think the shirt should be a darker color to contrast the graphic. Maybe black or dark blue?
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the shirt will definately be darker... the dark blue or royal blue shirts work best
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i'm having a braingazm...i love swords and ninjas!! sequence is great, and the design is simple...excellent
as i've said before, less is more and this is reall less!!! |
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fight and die
one winner one looser I really like the art don't like the dead part |
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really good, maybe you could have a black shirt too?
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love it
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reverse the black and white
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