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Java n' Smokes

by slaterock

About the design

Submitted by slaterock on April 4, 2005

For the Computer Arts competition. I wanted to do something rather simple. Normally, when I'm having designers block, I buy a pack of cigarettes and brew up a pot of coffee, thus the cup of coffee and cigarette in the design. Feedback would be great.

Economos

why are the socks and briefs visible?

batbanana

that's the best part!

Rise_of_emp

pretty cool style.... don't like the placement. should be centered on chest.

amlingisrad

lol this is so wierd! but i like it.

dubpapa

I do like the illustration, but don't care for the bottom right placement.

Insert_Name_Here

NOOOOOOOOO why does coffee have to be incorporated into such a BAD design?!?!?!? Shame on you for slandering the almighty bean-drink!!!

chimbleysweep

sorry i really don't like this =\

hongkongphooey

im thinking centered would be best. but thats great! i love that you can see the socks and briefs. haha.

slaterock
slaterock profile pic Artist

Originally i had planned on giving all the clothes a transparent effect, using different opacity for different layers, but then I remembered about the 4 color max rule, and had to revert to this.

Emyko

I enjoy how excited he is about his coffee and cigarettes. I don't get how the underwear plays into this either. But hooray for coffee and smokes.

Manta

Invisible trousers, excellent.
There's something about his head which doesn't sit right to me, but it's nice.

evilina

no?

ishkababble

no pants? it leaves you thinking too much about how he has no pants... or see through pants, which would clear designers block faster than coffer and cigarettes...

megggan

i think he has no pants because he's relaxing. having coffee, ciggies, and hanging out in his unders. what could be better?

tag

i think this would be better without the person. something more diagrammatic could be funnier... just undies + coffee + cigarettes (equals "all you need"). right now its a little too Tom Cruise in "Risky Business"

slaterock
slaterock profile pic Artist

tag, i was thinking that originally. and i just might follow through with it... thanks guy!

W.A.I.F.

this is sweet. but i would like to see it larger and centered on chest or at least on chest level, but still off center. coffe and cigarettes cure almost anything, except maybe lung cancer and ulcers :)

princessfifi

hurrah for invisible pants.

wishingx101

underneath it all he's just a slacker

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