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by slaterock   
For the Computer Arts competition. I wanted to do something rather simple. Normally, when I'm having designers block, I buy a pack of cigarettes and brew up a pot of coffee, thus the cup of coffee and cigarette in the design. Feedback would be great.
Economos
Economos on Apr 05 '05
why are the socks and briefs visible?
batbanana
batbanana on Apr 05 '05
that's the best part!
Rise_of_emp
Rise_of_emp on Apr 05 '05
pretty cool style.... don't like the placement. should be centered on chest.
amlingisrad
amlingisrad on Apr 05 '05
lol this is so wierd! but i like it.
dubpapa
dubpapa on Apr 05 '05
I do like the illustration, but don't care for the bottom right placement.
Insert_Name_Here
Insert_Name_Here on Apr 05 '05
NOOOOOOOOO why does coffee have to be incorporated into such a BAD design?!?!?!? Shame on you for slandering the almighty bean-drink!!!
chimbleysweep
chimbleysweep on Apr 05 '05
sorry i really don't like this =\
hongkongphooey
hongkongphooey on Apr 05 '05
im thinking centered would be best. but thats great! i love that you can see the socks and briefs. haha.
slaterock
   slaterock on Apr 05 '05
Originally i had planned on giving all the clothes a transparent effect, using different opacity for different layers, but then I remembered about the 4 color max rule, and had to revert to this.
Emyko
Emyko on Apr 06 '05
I enjoy how excited he is about his coffee and cigarettes. I don't get how the underwear plays into this either. But hooray for coffee and smokes.
Manta
Manta on Apr 06 '05
Invisible trousers, excellent.

There's something about his head which doesn't sit right to me, but it's nice.



evilina
evilina on Apr 06 '05
no?
Autodafe
Autodafe on Apr 06 '05
yes!
Funkyfairy
Funkyfairy on Apr 06 '05
yes.
patrickmoberg
patrickmoberg on Apr 06 '05
No face?
boondock_represent
boondock_represent on Apr 07 '05
SEXY!
ishkababble
ishkababble on Apr 07 '05
no pants? it leaves you thinking too much about how he has no pants... or see through pants, which would clear designers block faster than coffer and cigarettes...
megggan
megggan on Apr 09 '05
i think he has no pants because he's relaxing. having coffee, ciggies, and hanging out in his unders. what could be better?
tag
tag on Apr 09 '05
i think this would be better without the person. something more diagrammatic could be funnier... just undies + coffee + cigarettes (equals "all you need"). right now its a little too Tom Cruise in "Risky Business"
slaterock
   slaterock on Apr 09 '05
tag, i was thinking that originally. and i just might follow through with it... thanks guy!
W.A.I.F.
W.A.I.F. on Apr 09 '05
this is sweet. but i would like to see it larger and centered on chest or at least on chest level, but still off center. coffe and cigarettes cure almost anything, except maybe lung cancer and ulcers :)
stucknsantee
stucknsantee on Apr 10 '05
random
princessfifi
princessfifi on Apr 10 '05
hurrah for invisible pants.
wishingx101
wishingx101 on Apr 11 '05
underneath it all he's just a slacker

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