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 ver 2 of the bulb shirt...textless, this displays the idea more thouroughly than the "off" stasis of the previous version. I dont count "!" as text, if you do...by all means sound it out for me.
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this is really good art, however I'd rather see it:
minus the '!' moved down a little with the bulbs spread out a little more not on frickin' safety orange Alex's predicted final score for this entry: 2.42 |
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you can dance if you want to....
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i'm with kemmler on this one
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Yep, lose the !
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6 colours and loose the ! .
Maybe middle bulb should not be yellow, but just have the spiral thing inside glowing and some sort of lines around the bulb to suggest glow. |
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astute observation....Ive seen shirts with 8 get printed....
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don't use the !
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cliche
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and your idea of that cliche` would be?
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I think it's great if you lose the exclamation point and maybe space out the bulbs; they seem too bunched together to me.
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yeah I'll redo it...even at the expense of being called CLICHE`...
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grayehound on Apr 05 '05 The light bulb has to be in the top ten of overused clichés. On the positive side, you could replace it with a candle, which was the number one overused cliché meaning "idea" for the three millinia prior to the 1920's It's since fallen into the "retro" catagory, making it cool again.
Aside from that, good illustration, but everything is too tightly packed together. Oh, and isn't the "!" the OTHER cliché for "I've got an idea?" |
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engh...perhaps, but I resubmitted this again spaced and sans "!"
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to many colors
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well yeah and I dropped the colors to four.. but again...I ve seen designs print with gradient AND more than 4.
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i like...
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why did you put the "!" at the end?
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oh.. sorry i just meant the lightbulbs are cliche.. they've have been used over and over to describe "idea"... there's probably a better way to convey the message. Nice illustrations though
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the "!" is representing the idea that even when you feel that your resources are depleted, you still find a way o get it done....becoming self reliant so to speak. I guess I could have illustrated that a lot better though.
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the bulbs are almost on t he on the face... lower that and you got something. good idea, maybe lose the "!" though, but good idea none the less.
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who gives a fuck if something is cliche, that means people like it...
D.O.T. orange is a little blinding... |
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yeah....there is a ver 3 of his too....
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light bulbs suck, i like thomas edison sucks and so does alexander grahm bell does too, or whoever invented the light bulb. they stick, im out, i peed
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i ust don't lik e the shirt colors
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actually KPizzle - in a way they do...guess what...theres a vaccum inside...
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don't get rid of the "!"
just give it some style man it's so plain, and the bulbs actually have some detail, so don't leave your punctuation hanging |
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lol... yeah....I dropped the "!", and spaced it out...dropped the colors to 4 and resubmitted it
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I like, clever idea! The "!" needs to stay where it is if you ask me.
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Yeah, I liked the !, you negative nancies.
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cant win with it cant win with out....like my wife
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hmmm....you guys must really HATE this idea
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theres always version 3 to shoot down :)
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