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Much better. Black for me
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grayehound on Apr 07 '05 If god hated assholes, why does everyone have one?
Better. The halo was a nice addition and the rays look better, though I'm curious why the outlines around the clouds are so much more poorly done that the box and why the rays are visible behind them. The black tee looks good, plus it gives you another color to play with...amybe for them rays. |
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Yes, this is a much much much better job, even though I did like the other. I like black as well.
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much better, still not a huge of the rays. but if they were a different color on the black shirt then maybe i'd be convinced their rad.
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just checked out the last one....far better!!(this one).....good composition and placement....well done batbanana
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thanks a lot, ladies and fellas!
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I think it would be a lot better if they didn't say HOLY SMOKES. Just leave it implied, way cooler that way.
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bhaering - i definately like the text. i think the design needs it. ALL smoke packages have text, so I figure that Holy Smokes should have their name on the box too.
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good concept. good design.
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MUCH NICER this time....MUCH NICER
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Like it!
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this is the coolest shirt i have seen on here so far.....5, and maybe a new tshirt for me
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great perspective of the pack ...
and great text as well ...only a small detail...the tufts of cloud have a transparent border between them outside the ray circle...but inside them they have grey even where there wouldnt be the rays beneath them...did i make sense? |
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i'd hate to see how much the first one sucked if this is way better.
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Nice design and use of colour (or the lack thereof) inside the pack. I'd remove that 'dotted circle' and the text though, it really speaks for itself already.
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haha. good one.
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Oh hell yes!
Great flippin' design! 5$ |
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Better than the first, but it doesn'd need the circle of grey blocks in the background.
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slaterock on Apr 09 '05 hehe, great idea. smokes...
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it made me laugh
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HAH. love it. you're amazing.
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i'm in love with this shirt.
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FINALLY!
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I'll give it a 1, but try to remember that I hate "God"
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Ok, Mentlly (is that supposed to say mentally?) Guitarded. I WILL remember that you hate "God". Thanks for the singular point!!
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Haha.
This gave ame a little chuckle. It borders slightly on those Old Navy "fake" shirts but your design is so wonderful and professional looking that it easily get $5 from me. |
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yes its mentally, im not stupid. mentallyguitarded doesnt fit into most username limits.
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i think that this one is much much much better...
although i DID choose to keep the \"holy rays of light\", but I made them way cooler.
Please comment, but try to remember that God hates assholes.