Chocolate Holepunch

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Chocolate Holepunch by lawrie

Scoring finished:

1547 days ago

Submitted on:

Apr 03 '05

Scored by:

517 people

Comments:

34 comments

Final average score:

2.03 out of 5

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by lawrie

This is my first attempt at a shirt design, so please be gentle.

exploding_girl on Apr 04 '05

i like this. a lot. i would wear this right now. good work for a first try! $5

Halvor Strand on Apr 04 '05

yea it's a great first try.
like the color combination alot actually.

dubpapa on Apr 04 '05

The name you chose to go with this design, may be my favorite part. good stuff

madcolleran on Apr 04 '05

ha! office equipment looking sleek. sort of a knock off of the swifpine stapler. good.

lawrie on Apr 04 '05

heh, i actually have a swingline design that i may throw in there at a later date. thanks everyone!

danimator on Apr 04 '05

Read like Homer: mmm...chocolate. <Snap!> DOH!

zenzella on Apr 04 '05

I like the design around the wholepuncher with the pink and white and the little stars, but I dont really like or understand the wholepuncher being there. Maybe if you put something else there I would like it more, but its still a cool graphic. 3/5.

batbanana on Apr 05 '05

oo maybe add some of the little holes it punched out...

lolarun! on Apr 05 '05

maybe..too big. but 5

captainfantastic on Apr 05 '05

Well I don't know what everyone else is getting at up there but I would never wear a holepuncher on a shirt. It looks like you have skillz (skills with a z!!!!) with vectoring. Try something more interesting..

allthingspop on Apr 05 '05

I agree with captain fantastic, but where's the brown dirt comboy? Sorry, Nevermind. Uh, yeah , subject matter is weird, but not weird enough in a way that gets me excited enough to buy it. Swirly graphic and stars are a little tentative. Artwork overall, expecially the stapler is well-done. I like the person's suggestion of having the punched out holes below it...maybe like bombs dropping...yeah, a carpet-bombing stapler. I'd wear THAT!

allthingspop on Apr 05 '05

P.S. Sorry, I meant hole-punch, not stapler. Brain fart. Whoops!

pandar on Apr 05 '05

I love the colors. Maybe make the holepunch a bit smaller? I like this shirt.

Desenchantee on Apr 05 '05

If I had a chocolate hole punch, I would not be hole punching any papers. Mmm..

charming_cheerio on Apr 05 '05

Soorry. I didnt know that was a CHOCoLATE hole punch. But I'd buy it. Heres a 5 for you. It's beautiful.

dovka on Apr 06 '05

I'd hit this!

lawrie on Apr 06 '05

thanks for the comments again. i'm not entirely sure how i'd implement the punched-out holes, since the concept may be jus ta little too abstract and end up looking like a bunch of random dots.

if i submitted t-shirts with photocopiers and staplers on them, people wouldn't really go for the whole office supplies thing in general? because i've got a whole slew of them :D

danimator on Apr 06 '05

you're gonna beat me man...sweet colors.
Well...About the comments about holes...If you put three equally spaced holes on the two stripes in front of the puncher...and set them askew from each other. (we're talkin' six holes now) That might work. Also, a nice bite out of the Hole punch to drive it home and BAM.

lawrie on Apr 06 '05

i like the idea of a bite out of the holepunch, and the holes (although the holepuncher i modeled this on only punches two holes at a time:P ).

Smartey Jonez on Apr 06 '05

This is a nice clean design..Dude, You set an Owl on Fire?
Woah.....Sick

amlingisrad on Apr 06 '05

Hahaha, put a bite in it and you've got a 5!

Strawbs on Apr 07 '05

??? Why would I want to wear a holepunch again? Somewhere else you design would be brilliant, but not on a tee.

ishkababble on Apr 07 '05

i'd like to see some little holes punched out too. maybe in that color line

stargurl333 on Apr 08 '05

i agree with danimator to every little thing they said. haha i love the idea its really cute i'd buy it!
5+$

mexican't on Apr 08 '05

you set an owl on fire?

Gothnoo on Apr 08 '05

I like how the various accessories around the holepunch are the color of the two other basic flavors of candy stuff, strawberry and vanilla.

Gothnoo on Apr 08 '05

jlan on Apr 08 '05

hohooo!!
perfectoo..

deerfaced on Apr 09 '05

i like it... i would make it a little smaller though. not by much. (if it goes smaller i'd buy one)

kimberlyG on Apr 10 '05

I still have no idea why anyone would put a hole puncher on a shirt, but i love it! haha its random like me , i would so buy it. 5$

ep2007 on Apr 10 '05

i dont understand the positive comments sorry.. i find this shirt lame. if i want to eat chocolate i'll eat it regular.. and i dont need a holepunch on a t-shirt.. the "shiny stars" should be different shapes instead of all the same thing just enlarged/minimized. 1

lawrie on Apr 10 '05

um, you do know that you don't have to eat the shirt, right?

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