Poltergeists are scary. But chickens are scarier.

Why are there train rails? (Fence?)
Leave them out and I quite like it.
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it weas kind of hard to tell what it was at first because of the fencey thing behind it...clever though.

Yes, lose the fence and it`s very cool.

Not your best design, but this one is fairly clever. The fence is distractingly busy and useless to the design and you probably don't need all four chicken ghosts to pull this off. One really well done one would be fine. The thought balloon is a bad cliche that has its place, just not here. The typography needs a LOT of work. You've got a good idea, just needs better execution.

I was nicer here, huh? :)

stupid fence!! i didn't even make the connection that it might look like train rails... I'll probably resubmit this without the lame fence, or a different one.

loose the fence

The fence ruins the design - the play on words works - very funny.

Hahaha. Cute. 4.

fence is too overpowering