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HolySmokes.... smooth, delicious cancer sticks, as endorsed by the Lord of Heaven Himself.
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no green rays of light or whatever, and center it. i would buy this shirt if it met my above specifications and yes i do want you to change your artistic vision to what i want. its only right
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A clever-ish play on words, but the imagery leaves a lot to be desired. A better illustration might've sold the idea better, but this one falls short.
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I think the exact opposite graye. The excecution is okay, compared to most... (See RHYMENOCEROUS) but the pun is stupid.
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hmmm well, i'll be resubmitting this next time, centered and without the rays of light.... i think i might do a golden gate around it.
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nice concept, but maybe change the rays of light to smoke/clouds; a cross between the exhale and the heavenly.
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if they weren't "holy smokes" i'd absolutly love it. the pun is no good. and a pack of cigarettes is nice and iconic and such
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missingno - i think you need to read either the title of the submission, or the writing on the box to solve that mystery... GOOD LUCK! :D
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Love this idea so much. Maybe if you could make the sides of the cross
look a little more like the marlboro box it would be perfect just a thought . As a smoker I want this shirt so bad... 5 |