nothin' to say.

reminds me of pretending to fly while on the swing. which is pretty damn cool. i love<3

nah. the plane needs more detail. the kid swinging looks exactly like a swinging kid (clip art) we used on a company calendar a few years ago.

thats cool. but burntfly can vouch for me that its not clipart as he watched me make this...so don't accuse me of copying, please.

plane needs to be longer and the child smaller i think. and the design smaller over all maybe slightly.

Yeah, whats the message? Is it anti-war? Does the kid want to grow up to pilot a fighter jet? Is he just playing and imagining he's flying?

I'm confused... and the silhouette of the jet looks blocky, maybe you should do this in a 3 dimensional perspective?

i don't want to say what the meaning i had in mind was when i created it because then it will limit people's ideas. so...interpret it in your own way.

the plane is really short... I know that it's supposed to be the angle, but i can't help but feel it's squashed.

I honestly don't like the plane, but really enjoy the kid and swing. It reminds me of spring, in a very pleasant way. And then if that were the case, it would most definately have to be a different color. Probably not the aim, but you know. 4

cool but it looks like the perspective is all wrong on the plane...

explain to me the perspective because i don't see it...if you mean proportions, then yeah theyre supposed to be skewed, but i don't see what you're talking about with perspective =\

the plane looks like it is going farther away, but the kid looks like he is going straight to the right, instead of going father aswell.

i still can't see it, but maybe its because of the way i did the nose of the jet.

the plane kind of looks like a bird. the front part.

the plane and kid appear to be moving in different directions..

What does it mean?

oh shit, this is pretty sweet

hippy anti-war design submission #4,393,345......next

the jet silhouette is pretty bad, though i like the idea. maybe just add more detail.

the coolest possible thing you can do in the whole world is pidgeonhole anything that includes jets/tanks/missles into an "anti-war" design. not to sound like a jackass, but some people are just fucking morons.

So by your comment tgregoryknox, you're all for sending your country's children to war?

Being ex military, I like this design on so many levels. The fact that the two objects are outof proportion makes it much more surreal. War or anti-war - I have my own opinons, and can tell from the mil. intel. aspect....there is a lot people dont know that they think they do....regardless of meaning or agenda - i like this shit based off of design and the interpretive concept alone. 5 n buy

I think it would look better if the plane seemed to be pulling the child -- ie the child was behind the plane a bit and at more of an angle so the whole thing looked like it was in motion. But I really like it.

Yes

i love it.
immediate buy.

Nice!

I wouldn't have anything too say either... zer0. just ugly in general. the plane looks ackward, the boy looks weird, the perspective is off, its too big. how about you spend less time put everyone else's designs down and put more time into your own.

well damn, look who's talking.

Interesting Anti-war comment

i was not accusing you of copying chimbley, i just said it looked like a swinging kid clipart piece we used once on a calendar. i don't doubt that you drew it and don't need to verify it with anyone else. apologies if i offended.

this is a very different style than your usual fare, eh? i am wondering if you are going to resubmit the tree you did a few weeks back (?)

i did but it was declined as a resubmission because i forgot to change the title...i'll probably try again in a week or so.

I like the image of the boy on the swing but it's hard to tell that it's a plane, I only realized that from the comments.

maybe this will help a bit grand master of the decemberists.
the plane looks like a weiner dog;
short, fat, and low.
if you would like to get the image of the plain across better i would have it at a descending point,
to where the whole thing is slanted at an angle to where you can see the top and side of the plane at the same time.
the boy trailing behind would be a better design,
i believe there is great potential in this shirt.
resubmit it with a proper name and you've got it.

I love the image, but like burrn girl says; the plane doesn't look like a plain at all. you should study som plane-pictures or something. But I love everything about it anyway

Looks quite clearly like a jet to me still…i can see the confusion because of the nose of the plane, but yeah… it's clearly a plane.

Not to fond of the idea but i get the concept and design.

Keep drawing