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Mar 24 '05
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keefry
About my design
by keefry
This is my first submission here. Please be gentle.
stealyourface
stealyourface on Mar 24 '05
cute!
EvilCarrotChomp
EvilCarrotChomp on Mar 24 '05
try a different shirt color. tan seems out of place. maybe something more tropical... blue? red? green?
dawgette
dawgette on Mar 24 '05
i think the bird is adorable but yah don't like the shirt color cuz it doesnt suit the birdy
keefry
keefry on Mar 24 '05
Thanks for the help! I see exactly whatcha mean. Maybe I'll change the color of his tongue and nostril and make him on red.. I really wanted to have him on orange or gold, but he just blended in too much. Should have tweaked the colors more.
Do you think they'd mind an eventual repost with different color shirts?
slingy
slingy on Mar 24 '05
The bird looks too sassy. like it's saying "you GO girl!" or something
wemetnnam
wemetnnam on Mar 24 '05
quality shit
alpha
alpha on Mar 25 '05
Hmm not feeling the color of the shirt but kool deisgn.
orbie007
orbie007 on Mar 25 '05
green shirt and I'd like it, maybe a little smaller too, not much though
Charf
Charf on Mar 25 '05
i would like to see the shirt in red
keefry
keefry on Mar 25 '05
More colors:

http://gozips.uakron.edu/~kfry/images/cockatooRED.gif
http://gozips.uakron.edu/~kfry/images/cockatooGREEN.gif
http://gozips.uakron.edu/~kfry/images/cockatooBLUE.gif
atomicvibe
atomicvibe on Mar 25 '05
Sorry...this is not working for me.
e-man doherty
e-man doherty on Mar 27 '05
being from australia it jus tlooks like some shirt that touristy grandmas's would be buying at soem cheesy tourist shop
tacobear
tacobear on Mar 27 '05
its a bit too cute for my taste. also i agree about the colour. its a cute design so the use of a more "cute" colour would be better.
keefry
keefry on Mar 27 '05
I whole heartedly apologize to all native australians :)
jessmisfit
jessmisfit on Mar 27 '05
smaller
Mr_union
Mr_union on Mar 29 '05
being from australia i say this sucks
slobirdrop
slobirdrop on Mar 29 '05
think of it like this.

a giant, abcessed arm pit hair, has grown out tha crack. somehow, its aromatic quality and your eating habits (ie. lotta crumbs) has attracted a crazy bird that takes advantage of the wearer's misfortunes. no?

interesting idea. its like.. pirate.. home hobbyist.
nykke
nykke on Mar 30 '05
i agree that this doesn't do much for me (another australian) but am now horrified to learn Mr Union is an aussie. life will never be the same.
but it's a clean illustration and better than some so give it another go. Maybe try using less colours? And being a little less realistic, simpler. But well done on your first effort.
thedeadponyshow
thedeadponyshow on Mar 30 '05
now thats foul
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