move the placement up a bit.

hmm.. im a blue person myself. the green/yellow/white looks a bit irish. blue is associated as a sleek color. it would be awesome to see this on a blue shirt with navy blue, white & silver. that would be very sleek, very james bond. If you want to pick up on themes of rocket man (the old plane, the speeding buller man) try a red them instead of blue. Lastly, the box is akward, the weakest narrative point. Is that a bomb or a breifcase? Right now it's both. Try to decide between the two and reconstruct that portion of the image to make the subject more clear. Smart design, concept, and great cohesion.

reminds me of these guys:

http://www.friendswithyou.com/gallery2/gallery.html

check out Sony AXN animation, girl icon, 2nd from the right.

dude i cant spell. thats bullet and theme.

It's a little noisy.

a little, is that what you said second scout? what??? I can't hear you over the design of this shirt? Could you repeat that?

Looks nice, but I'd want it on a different colored shirt.

Id like it in the corner more :)

thanks for comments ~!!

love this shirt! love the green! :)

looks good I'd buy it.

The design has great energy, but it's kinda lacking in meaningfulness. I give it a 4. Please do keep trying, though.

a breath of fresh air. I've seen so many bad designs recently.

this rocks.full stop.

has a hip-hop feel, grafitti-esque.... dosen't do it for me.