it's jus a lighthearted take on the beloved blackmetal scene.....

I love the dude... your font treatment could use some work. I guess I like things smaller, more sutle. I would love to see him smaller with no words . Your design of the dude... he rocks!

Just ditto on everything that Natashalicious said except I think with work the text bubble and text could be a funny part of the shirt.

For some reason the guy reminds me of the dude on the spongebob movie.

I'm guessing this was made in photoshop because of the pixelation, if you drew it in illustrator it would look much better.

Advice: I'd really like to see more color tees, and lose the text... other than that its pretty nice. 4.

Email me... deathbylove76@gmail.com yea i would want you in company. Okay?

thanks ... it's done in freehand actually...
i exported to photoshop...

yeah e font needs some werk i guess
but it's all good...
keep up w the comments...
i'll werk on it
cheers

i think it'd be nicer without the speech bubble.

I like the design, I would keep the speech bubble even, just make the whole thing a lot smaller and then I'd wear it...

HAHA!!

He looks like Abbath from Immortal.

I like it, not too sure about the speech bubble though.

make it small and centered, keep the text, maybe a different font (something gothic?). Then it would rock.

Awesome! I'd wear it.

Yeah, the speech bubble is a good idea, but doesn't look quite right. Maybe a more traditional bubble- white with a black outline?

Still a great design though

i think the reason the bubble's been seen to be a bit iffy is because it's too far away from the dude. just move it straight down so it's actually coming out of his head. i think it's a great design though. :)

Speech bubble good!
Font bad!
Lil dude...sweeeeet!

thanks for e dope advises!
much appreciated one and all...
was my first time submittin but was def fun nonetheless...
cheers to all e great designers here....

i'll try and send stuff in the future
coolness to all!

probably smaller artwork

this quite frankly its absolutely terrible. The idea is lackluster at best, calling the execution poor would be akin to calling hitler a little mean, and whatever font you use gives me the runs from my eyeballs. I think you should put some effort into the shirt before you post it up next time.

jesus didn't die for your sins so that you could put out shit like this :-D

Design is far too big and poor quality.

haha...
mr union....

i think u should use a wee bit of that lil brain of yours
before even leavin a comment.....

r u frustrated every wakin hour lookin at the mirror
that u gotta diss ME for some masturbatory reasons?
i'm not here to please yer exclusive caviar like taste fer design
i did wat i did cos i liked it...
not for u or hitler or jesus...
out of curiosity i check out yer profile...LOL
u callin my design shit???

look at yerself in the mirror .
and ask JESUS why he gave YOU SHIT for a face
i dun mean to be personal... but please...
be a gentleman..
not an asswipe if u wanna leave comments

make the character smaller
make him the focus in terms of placement

a red shirt probably doesn't spell metal
even if its meant to be funny

add some colour to his bling
wipe out the black speech bubble and just splash some font across
the illustration lacks depth and needs work

the best bit is his face and expression and the spotted beard thing