Corporate Evil
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Mar 18 '05
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more detail, and i think you should chage the placement of the text very good idea
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I think maybe a different font would be better. Though that may just be me since I hate hate hate hate Times New Roman. And then I agree with what Steak Jones said. More detail on the man, particularly around the eye area, and change the placement of the text. straight lines are boring. Definitely a good idea though, especially because my friends and I all complain about "the man" .
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i think the text should just be "the 'Man'", without "the root of all corporate evil"
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awesome. just an idea, but if you could get the copywrite, use the face of agent smith (hugo weaving's mug) for the matrix? just a thought.
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Chance the font or text placement, or you could just buy "Corporate Zombie".
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Who's that? John F Kennedy, Jr.?
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I'd simplify it down to "The Man", too. Go with a different font, too.
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i agree with Shahla, the illustration on the face could be a lot better, but then you do want to make the guy look ugly as hell, pun intended. i would probably add like cartoonish devil horns too, just to further get the point across.
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I disagree on the devil horns comments. I think that would lose all subtlety.
I'm wondering if this might work better if "the man" himself looked a little more iconic, rather than photographic. I find myself looking at the shirt, thinking that it's supposed to be someone I recognize, and not recognizing them. I have a feeling that reaction might be somewhat universal among people who would see the shirt; they'd all be left wondering if they were missing something, even though they weren't. |
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First, thank you all for your suggestions.
I'm wondering what exactly you mean on iconic, though? I've already made a version where it's more detailed, which will most likely make him even more familiar looking. Not exactly sure what you mean. Or rather, how to go about doing that. |
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Love it. I agree with previous posts about losing the second line of text. However, I think Times New Roman is good. I hate hate hate hate Times also, but in this case, you're trying to make it look, well instructional or informational, like a generic label or what not. It will get to artsy if you give it a strange font.
Oh, and there is a little too much space between 'The' and 'Man'. Kern it in a bit. |
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I like it. would prefer it without the second line of copy. The guy has a Kryton sort of feel that made me giggle like a schoolgirl
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Too easy.
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Hi, Sean! Everyone's right...the "root of all corporate evil" is...lame. Try Arial for "the man" if you don't have any niftier fonts....
Did we have any French homework? |
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I love it how it is. Except I do agree with bringing 'the' and "man" closer together. love you!
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Oi, that looks a bit weird. Accidentally left myself logged on at the gal's house, and she accidentally posted under my name.
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sweet cutout filter
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