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I've Always Wanted A Rabbit

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denn

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Bubbles are a bit like dreams - there's no effort in blowing them, but you never know when they'll pop.



The background is an alternate colour choice.
on Mar 17 '05
Can i have one with a boy blowing a monster
on Mar 17 '05
Erm, can i rephrasethat, can i have a boys one with a kid blowing up a bubble that looks like some kind of monster/dragon/dinosaur. I like this design but it's a wee bit girly for me but i reckon my wife would go for it.
blolly
blolly on Mar 17 '05
This is really excellent.
chimbleysweep
chimbleysweep on Mar 17 '05
it doesnt need the buildings behind it..its a strong design without them, and its just being brought down by it.
pandar
pandar on Mar 17 '05
I love it! Would definitely buy
denn
denn on Mar 17 '05
That's funny, in my original the background was pink - but hey, if Threadless likes white, then white it is :)



Yes I agree it is a rather girly shirt - thanks for the idea for the guys' version! Mmmm...dinos...
peenut
peenut on Mar 18 '05
i think the colors n the building didnt work. but i like the concept somehow
sku
sku on Mar 18 '05
Looks like something from the Sandman. Less girly in bubble shapes and color scheme, please?
death by crayon
death by crayon on Mar 18 '05
Better colors.
miao
miao on Mar 18 '05
Great design without the buildings.
SolitudeFollows
SolitudeFollows on Mar 18 '05
is that Seattle?
xghostofafallenrequiemx
xghostofafallenrequiemx on Mar 18 '05
I like this one. I'd buy it.
kalipest
kalipest on Mar 18 '05
ooh it's lovely, 5 + buy
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! on Mar 18 '05
tee hee. i love it. i'd buy it.
denn
denn on Mar 19 '05
Thank you for all the comments! Always great to hear feedback.



I'm honestly not all that impressed with the buildings, either, but I'm so used to the idea of needing a sort of background that I put them in for the sake of it. I'll probably do away with them altogether in the next version. Should there be clouds instead, though? Or is it really, really OK to not have a background?



Things to do so far:

- Remove buildings

- Rethink colours

- Make more gender-neutral version with dinos and monsters and animals. (Yay, I love dinos! Don't know why I didn't think of that!)



Lemme know if I missed anything or if you have any other suggestions!
indieflea
indieflea on Mar 19 '05
TAKE AWAY THE CITY BACKGROUND and you have yourself a 5+ buy shirt!!
jennyg
jennyg on Mar 19 '05
reminds me of a sponge bob episode
torra
torra on Mar 19 '05
Something seems odd about it, maybe it's the background, maybe the colors. Nevertheless, 5! I would buy this!
bluesexplosion
bluesexplosion on Mar 20 '05
you can get rid of the bulding and change the color of the tee. i love the design. that's a pretty idea.
komodori
komodori on Mar 20 '05
I think the colors will look better once the buildings are removed. I definately like this though.
on Mar 21 '05
You could just have a simple line instead of the buildings. I know that earlier i said it was a bit girly but think you should perhaps keep 2 seperate gender designs rather than that was neutral, you are always going to get some crossover amongst the populous. Personally i'd go for a blue shirt.
dbkliveson
dbkliveson on Mar 21 '05
One more vote for xing the buildings..



This rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice work!!!!!

theslyestfox
theslyestfox on Mar 22 '05
no buildings, but it's great
denn
denn on Mar 22 '05
Haha, okay - first thing I do will be to eliminate the buildings before I resubmit! ;)
mr.ben
mr.ben on Mar 22 '05
Very imaginative. The buildings are a bit long though.
soygood
soygood on Mar 23 '05
axe the building's the girl is too small and the colours suck but besides that its ok i guess ... very girly and not in the good way
lunarc
lunarc on Mar 23 '05
smaller please!
TheThirdNipple
TheThirdNipple on Mar 23 '05
You don't need that background. The background burst my bubble...
Nikolus
Nikolus on Mar 23 '05
I really love this.
fOi
   fOi on Mar 23 '05
As a GURL . . . i love the concept and have voted 5 + I'd buy it. Agree with the comments about ditching the buildings but quite like the colour of the girl and the bubbles. Would have been nice on a grey or yellow shirt. If ya do the version with a boy blowing a monster I'd def buy as well! Shweet.
missingno
missingno on Mar 23 '05
monster monster!
KPizzle
KPizzle on Mar 24 '05
Everyones a critic... keep it the way it is... i like it. Nice art. 5.
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