containing feelings
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Mar 17 '05
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No... sorry, this isn't good at all. Try making it a lot less sappy and lose the geometric background.
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good font, bad everything else.
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i really love the idea. it would be kewl with just the envelope. but its such a kewl idea! 4
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this isn't an emo website. no.
and please don't spell 'cool', k-e-w-l. |
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the geometric shapes just add confusion. Remember that everything in the design should be there for a reason...not just be there randomly.
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are you refferring to 'embers and envelopes' by MAE? If so, I think I automatically like you, but the design isn't that great.
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I think it's a good idea.
However, the execution needs a bit of work. For example: Try a white envelope on a darker colored shirt. Try making the entire design higher-contrast. (ie: don't use green and blue right next to each other) I look forward to seeing a revamp. =] |
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i agree with negetron - i think the placement should be different. maybe move it to the right of the shirt a little more. and i would lose the shapes in the background.
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now don't everyone run screaming from what i am about to say, but:
this is emo. |
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EMO. 0.
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belongs at Claire's.
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I also like the idea, but I don't like the gray shapes--makes it look like some border to be used in Word. Also not really liking the colors for the envelope, or the font...
So what you've got is really just a good idea. |
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No.
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im with elasticx, if its mae, sweetdeal! i like the colors and idea. but the shapes do through it off a bit.
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i think FEELING ENCLOSED would be better. feelings enclosed is kind of preschoolish.
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It might work better with a more-developed envelope with a font that looks like a rubber stamp. that gives it a juxtaposition of impersonal with highly-personal. lose the background.
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This is appalling! Yuk, horrible colours and everything - sorry but I can't look at it any more..
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