No... sorry, this isn't good at all. Try making it a lot less sappy and lose the geometric background.

good font, bad everything else.

i really love the idea. it would be kewl with just the envelope. but its such a kewl idea! 4

this isn't an emo website. no.
and please don't spell 'cool', k-e-w-l.

the geometric shapes just add confusion. Remember that everything in the design should be there for a reason...not just be there randomly.

are you refferring to 'embers and envelopes' by MAE? If so, I think I automatically like you, but the design isn't that great.

I think it's a good idea.
However, the execution needs a bit of work.
For example: Try a white envelope on a darker colored shirt.

Try making the entire design higher-contrast. (ie: don't use green and blue right next to each other)

I look forward to seeing a revamp. =]

i agree with negetron - i think the placement should be different. maybe move it to the right of the shirt a little more. and i would lose the shapes in the background.

now don't everyone run screaming from what i am about to say, but:
this is emo.

EMO. 0.

belongs at Claire's.

I also like the idea, but I don't like the gray shapes--makes it look like some border to be used in Word. Also not really liking the colors for the envelope, or the font...
So what you've got is really just a good idea.

No.

im with elasticx, if its mae, sweetdeal! i like the colors and idea. but the shapes do through it off a bit.

i think FEELING ENCLOSED would be better. feelings enclosed is kind of preschoolish.

It might work better with a more-developed envelope with a font that looks like a rubber stamp. that gives it a juxtaposition of impersonal with highly-personal. lose the background.

This is appalling! Yuk, horrible colours and everything - sorry but I can't look at it any more..