\"Words of My Heart\"
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And the text reads:

WHAT IS LIFE? WHAT IS LOVE?
WHAT IS DEATH? WHAT IS HATE?
MAYBE IT IS FOREVER. AND MAYBE IT IS NOT.
THOUGH, WE ARE ALIVE WE ALL TEND TO DISAGREE
THE WORLD IS AN ODD PLACE - IT IS FILLED WITH LOVE AND HATE.
SOME OF WHICH PREFER TO CHOOSE THE HATE BECAUSE IT SEEMS EASIER.
EASIER ON THEIR ALREADY “BURDENED AND TIRED SOULS” FROM THEIR EVERYDAY JOBS.
WHILE OTHERS FEEL THAT THE PATH OF LOVE IS THE ONLY ONE IN THIS WORLD OF OURS.
ON THE NEXT NOTE OF LIFE, SOME BELIEVE THERE ARE “PLENTY OF FISH IN THE SEA.”
HOWEVER ANOTHER BELIEF OF THE HUMAN SPECIES IS THAT THERE IS ONE SOUL MATE FOR THEM AND ONLY THEM.
THE IRONY OF ALL THESE BELIEFS IS THAT ABSOLUTELY NOTHING LASTS FOREVER IN THIS LIFE WE LIVE OUT BY DAY.
THOUGH THAT PERSPECTIVE WOULD COME FROM SOME REALIST AND NON-RELIGIOUS SOUL, DARE I SAY ONE WHO IS SCARED?
I DARE SAY IT AND I DO. LOVE DOES LAST FOREVER. THE LOVE TWO HUMANS SHARE IS ONE SACRED FACT SOMEONE WHO
IS IN LOVE WOULD MOST DEFINITELY AGREE WITH. HOWEVER, THE WORLD IS FILLED WITH LAIRS AND CHEATERS AND
MOST FACES WOULD SAY ONE MESSAGE AND MEAN, CONVEY AND/OR ACT UPON ANOTHER WHICH WOULD SHATTERD SOME FOLK.
BUT WHAT IF EVERYTIME I SAID I LOVE YOU I REALLY MEANT IT IN A WAY THAT I CANNOT BEGIN TO DESCRIBE?
WHAT IF I TOLD YOU ONLY THE TRUTH AND THAT TRUTH WAS THAT MY HEART IS YOURS?
ALL I WANT IS THE LOVE THAT YOU WOULD SHOWER ME WITH IF WE BOTH AGREED.
I WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR YOU IF YOU WOULD EVER LET ME DO SO IN THIS LIFE
THIS LIFE WE CALL EXISTENCE AND ANY OTHER MEANING WE CHOOSE.
WHAT IS YOUR MEANING OF LIFE? IS IT OF THE LOVE I FEEL FOR YOU?
OR MAYBE IT IS THE ETHEREAL CONNECTION THAT WE DO SO HAVE.
THAT CONNECTION THAT COMES ONCE IN A MILLION PEOPLE.
THAT CONNECTION THAT IGNITES OUR VERY SOULS.
THAT CONNECTION IS OUR TRUTH MY DEARLY BELOVED.
OUR TRUTH WHICH SHINES THROUGH THE CLOUDS
OF HARD TIMES AND THE CLOUDS OF MISFORTUNE;
AND SO I STATE, “I LOVE YOU MY DEARLY BELOVED,
I LOVE YOUR MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE ON THIS
SINFUL AND DREADFUL EARTH. YOU SHINE THROUGH
THOSE CLOUDS LIKE THE LIGHTS OF GOD FROM HEAVEN
AND YOU COMFORT MY VERY BEING WITH YOUR TOUCH.”
I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.
I LOVE YOU.
LOVE
ONLY
YOU

...i like it.

I would buy it!

5&$ definitely. Great job!

y do pplz say 5$, it doesnt make sense

for you $5 and more if i could

For once....the heart works....4.5

wow, I like it.
5 + Buy

Very nice. The heart made up of text should have smoother edges, but I'd still buy it!!! 5 and buy.

I like it, don't change a thing. The rough edges of the text almost make it look like a crest or a bird or something. Would buy, 5.

what if you put your little poem back in that shoe box on the top shelf in your closet? it might mean more if it wasnt on my t-shirt?

that's just a lovelyand romantic tee

I WANT THIS SHIRT! 5+ i would buy it! rock on!

hey, it's Brianna...will thisis aweshum! I am surprised...didn't know you liked fashion design?? NEways coooool! good luck

if you dont use the right to vote, the indians died for nothing...

absolutely awesome. 5+$

the red/white/black colorway thing seems a bit old to me. if you had another colorway i'd buy this for sure.

Am I the only one that doesn't like it? It just seems way too, I don't know, melodramatic to me. The words might as well mean nothing, because who is going to stare at someone's chest for that long?

I agree that you might not read it but who cares, it's the detail that counts, im impreseed that it's not just something along the lines of "i love you sweetumse" x 1000. Hooray for detail, but then im the kind of person that paints behind radiators even though "nobody will know", cool, i'd buy it for my wife. I dont care if that seems sickly sweet. Could do with one last proof read mind.

dam that shirt i sexy whoever you arthat mad this shirt i want your babies

dude nice.... i think its gunna get picked..

I love it. If this shirt does get printed (my fingers are crossed) it will be the first Threadless shirt I buy.

I really like this hirt i would totally buy it if it gets printed

5 and buy

doesnt belong on a tshirt sorry. nice though.

this is friggin awesome..ide deff buy it

woah.. i really actually like this.

Thats actually pretty cool, even though its like, another level of emo I can't even comprehend

5 and a $

i like it although...i have never felt that kind of love..so that shirt isnt for me..wow but it almost made me shed a tear...the last part when it stardted"but what if everytime i said i love..." down would be awesome thing to say to someone right before you propose marriage...

pretty coool.

sad to be a stickler, first of all, 'cause i kinda like this design.... but the text, if that's an accurate copy, needs a little revising.

aside from that, that's really powerful..

me gusta me gusta

Wow I really like this. And I hate Emo. It speaks to the geek in me with an ASCII feeling to it. Some more color choices would be nice but I give it a 5 and buy.

5 and buy for serious.

im looking at other shirts that arent nearly as good, and they have more points. why is that? this shirt is one of the best here.

I have no idea?

i have a question, i want to submit my own but i cant figure out how to make my JPG file a GIF file, do you have any idea?
by the way i really like this one. i like what you did with the words and i would def buy it.
<3

Um, what program are you using, puckerup?

Awesome

Sorry but it's SO CLICHE.
blaaaah.

I don't remember, tunastar, seeing a bunch of other shirts on Threadless.com with massive long writings on them...

i really don't like it. And it reminds me of Morgan designs from the 90's (Morgan the "fashionable" shop for girls). It made me cringe cos its SO cliche and black, red and white are colours i personally associate with the 90's. Maybe. Or someting. It just made me go "elurgh!"

i love this shirt!

I like it, the way the text is used makes it look almost like an angel and the heart is the heart of the angel.

Very lovely. It would almost seem to want to be clique, but it kicks the word clique in the face because it's so origional.

I love this. It's very artsy and poetic.

damn it, this shirt is terrible, and it's clear that a lot of these comments are from people that are friends with this person and only signed up to vote on it... also, jada, I think you mean cliche. for me this shirt falls right into the 'emo' bin. It doesn't look very good, nobody will ever read all of that, and who needs some deep emotional declaration (written by someone else) on a T-SHIRT? did it occur to anyone that shirts are something of a shallow medium for this kind of thing? AHH!

Well Kemmler I am glad to you you follow the rules that are posted right below the comment box. It states: "Note: If you're going to criticize please be constructive and respectful about it.", which you obviously and absolutely did not do. You just ran your mouth about something that you personally did not like that was not offensive in any way, therefore no blatant reason to run your mouth like that.

Why don't you calm down, watch the language and respect what other people do like the site asks, hmm?

I absolutly love this shirt. The rough edges of the words, the small red heart in the center. The colors are great! Just one request... make sure that the text is grammatically correct, cause the poem typed out above has a couple of errors. But... I love the shirt... I would definitely buy!

aww. it looks like wings. five + buy. lovely.

Totally make this a shirt beacuse i would most definitely buy it!!!
You have to!!!!
Awesome!!!!
Indescribable!!!!

so emo. i'd buy it. :P

it's cool, but i don't like the shape.

i do think the text is a touch long, though i love how the shape of the text looks. i'd probably edit the text down a bit, make the font a touch bigger, but leave it pretty much how it is.

as far as the comments as to who would wear that 'cause no one could read it.....if i got it it wouldn't be to show off my cool shirt, it would be to have a cool shirt that i like.

;)

i agree with kemmler. this is boring and tedious. 0.

The person who reads this shirt is going to take five minutes sitting there concentrating onyour chest. It's pretty, but the text is really for the person wearing the shirt. It's a lovely idea, but I don't know who would read this entire thing. And for $15, you could have the poem printed on some nice paper, assemble it into a little laminated book and keep it in your breast pocket.

I like the design, but it's not a whole lot of practical.

i love it man awesome job ill give it the big 5 plus the box of tickered ness and i think if it wins which it will... i will come and buy it aweosme job... cant be screwed reading the writing coz im a lazy lazy man

I like
5+$

poem isn't really that original...doesn't inspire me or anything...the design is nice though, if a little cliche...

I would love to buy it.. Good JOB!!!

PS, I think my comments were constructive as they directly related to elements of the shirt, therefore the criticism could be taken into account in future designs.

nicely said Kemmler

hey, good score on this one, good luck on getting it printed.

my god, that brought tears to my eyes. williampansky, will you marry me? i want to know that love...
anyway, i think that says enough. 5 & buy, of course.
but i wish the designer came with the shirt...

I love it, i'd hit it. I mean, buy it.

i absolutely love this shirt. i would buy it in a heartbeat. they way you described love is perfect<3 good job!

No wonder this didn't get printed.