Come Back To The Ring That Love You
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2638 days ago
Submitted on:
Mar 08 '05
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22 comments
Average score:
2.04 from 415 votes
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i see that english is not your first language.
get someone to proofread your designs. |
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i cant see it
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THEN ZOOM IN!
I like it, I would change the typography. Make it lower case and change the font... and of course spelling check... |
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I really like the art work but you need to reword the writing desperately or put it in your native language or something that will make it at least sound coherent.
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The atrwork is awesome
fix the text and its a deff 5 and buy |
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if it was in your native language id give it a 5+$ but no.. 4 definitely though.
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loved?
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This is really good.. except the whole engles thing...
Put it in native language, its not a bad thing, usually more interesting than english, and people will pay more attention to the text that way too, but it still doesnt have to interfere with flow of design. |
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I think it just needs to be moved down a tad, and the gold ring removed. Perhaps the white block could be extended a little and the text reversed out of it. In any case 5 for having the courage to put your dedication up here in front of what can be sometimes a nasty audience.
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I like it, but agree that it should be in your native language. It would sound more beautiful (I love other languages) and people would still understand the concept.
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that 'love you'?
more like 'loved' or 'loves' |
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what
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like.
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cool.
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native language would be awasome. me gusta, cinco+!
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awesome* woops guess i need spellcheck too :-(
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dont see it
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this is a really sweet tee (as in awesome and sentimental) i reckon native language would rock. 4
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native languageeee. i still give it a 5 though cause that story is touching and its a nice shirt.
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i'd say make the text a little brighter too, once you fix it.
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