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 Link to 4-color full image ( &and the \\\'toon I drew over ten years ago, that it is based on): http://img131.exs.cx/img131/2126/asalt4color9ke.gif & http://kemo57.tripod.com/deadly.html
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lose the white and do this on another color.
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agreed 100%. really good concept tho, id buy it, eventually.
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and leave out the text.
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nah, i think you'd need the text, there's too many idiots out there. real clever, mr.!
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JESUS! this is ALREADY A T SHIRT FROM ABOUT 5 YEARS AGO! YOU GET A NEGATIVE ONE MILLION FOR THIS.
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absolute great-ness. : D
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lol Kemmler... more than one person invented the wheel, y'know. ;)
Thanks everyone. I'll work on it. |
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that's clever, but not exactly shirt material.
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the idea is there,a metaphor for the irrational hatred between the palestinians and isrealies or whoever, for me to buy it you have to amp up the ultra violence, have the salt straggle the pepper with wire or use a ice pick or set him on fire or walk on to a bus full of little peppers with on bomb straped to it's chest. you know use your imagination. ; )
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good idea, but a really bad design. work it out.
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love the idea.....this will develop into something v.sweet.
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thats beast, id buy it if it was on a black shirt with no white background
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ha it looks like the salt is wearing the shirt
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Great concept, not so great design. Redraw it - possibly by hand and then touch up in illustrator. Loose the white, add some colour, change the font of the text. Also, don't pepper shakers generally have around 3 holes in the top?
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lose the white box around it and the text and itd be flippin sweet..i love it. high 5
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now thats some funny shit
-lose the white box -lose the text -smaller image its a great idea... but, the image overall is horrible. there is no style to it, just a gimicky joke. this needs to be reworked |
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I gave it a 4
Again loos the text and the white background and then is would be 5$ |
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I think it's cool so BE NICE!
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i think it will look better if u remove the white box, coz now it look something like u pasted a white piece of drawing on it, that spoil the design.
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na.
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It made me laugh. I like it.
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No white box, though.
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this sucks so much.
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it made me laugh...but lose the white block, change the shirt color and don't lose the text because that's the only thing that could potentially make this design work
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I say loose the text.
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I say keep the text... but lose the white box.
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Better as a cartoon than a shirt.
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NEEDS colour.
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add some color, and itll be sweet! i love it tho, it made me laugh!
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This would be way better if you lost that white block and made the actual drawing/lines white of just contour outlines. then change the font up and it'd be doable.
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lose white box and keep the text becuase it makes the shirt
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nice but it's very similar to a shirt by grimm: http://www.grimminc.com/asl.html
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im suprised to see that hardly anyone addressed the fact that it's about the ugliestly drawn picture i've ever seen. my butt could draw a better salt shaker than that one. it was a good attempt, and use a better font than that. looks like you created it in ms paint
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"nice but it's very similar to a shirt by grimm: http://www.grimminc.com/asl.htm"
I wouldn't know about that. Never heard of him/her. See, I drew this 'toon back in '89. The original is here: http://kemo57.tripod.com/deadly.html That is a scan, but I can produce the dated hard copy if needed. |
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