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by komodori
My first submission to threadless....actually my first submission to anything really....so terrified, but it's more for the learning experience.
cubspaw
cubspaw on Feb 22 '05
I love it.

Great colors, great graphic.

5
TylerTee
TylerTee on Feb 22 '05
Mwahaha, silly, I like. That straight line might be throwing the rest off though, maybe it would be better without. Either way, nice job.
okay_cupid
okay_cupid on Feb 22 '05
somebody has taaalent... *poke poke*

hope you'll make more submissions. i like this one lots.
Rise_of_emp
Rise_of_emp on Feb 22 '05
rad



Tyler's right though
caoutchouc
caoutchouc on Feb 22 '05
I absolutely love this, and with the line gone, even better. Would definitely buy and wear (love brown!)
tripmachine
tripmachine on Feb 22 '05
I love it a lot.

I would really like to own that.

5
chocosaur
chocosaur on Feb 22 '05
That happened to me! When I was 7 some goose chased me around the duck pond. cute shirt :)
KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Feb 22 '05
man, I thought "leda" when I saw this, therefore your shirt is stressing me out cause I think that swan is about to rape that girl man!
LittleBlueBird
LittleBlueBird on Feb 22 '05
omg, the line kills it, bad line, bad. But I've been attacked like that by a swan. Not fun, but damn funny on this shirt, i'd buy it if it didn't have the line.
komodori
komodori on Feb 23 '05
Well if it doesn't make it (which is very likely) then I will resubmit it without the line.
lai
lai on Feb 23 '05
this gives me flashbacks. +5

i agree with the no line, though.
NotBeingOriginal
NotBeingOriginal on Feb 23 '05
it's funny to see that on a shirt but if that ever happend to you, you wouldn't be laughing, 5
enimsaj
enimsaj on Feb 23 '05
HAHA! i strangely like it :]
Liwee
Liwee on Feb 23 '05
LOL cute :>
j-roen
j-roen on Feb 23 '05
i'm sorry for this beaing not a really constructive post, but love it, 5!
jbyron
   jbyron on Feb 23 '05
dig it. lose the line.
joel mills
joel mills on Feb 23 '05
I love this shirt, only because when I was younger, my sister got bit on the butt by a swan, and it was the funniest thing I had ever seen. 5&$ all the way ( I agree on the line though)
politics
politics on Feb 24 '05
thats cool. i can see it as a band shirt.
beau575
beau575 on Feb 24 '05
i love it cause the same thing happened to me when i was young
woodwardo
woodwardo on Feb 24 '05
this is rad. i like
puckyou
puckyou on Feb 24 '05
haha..thats a frightening situation i must say
dustyj72
dustyj72 on Feb 24 '05
That girl probably deserves it tho. $5
slugo
slugo on Feb 24 '05
sweeeeet
gumnuthead
gumnuthead on Feb 25 '05
Congrats! Nice shirt. Nice colours. But like they say, the straight line is out of place with the other design.
Althestane
Althestane on Feb 25 '05
I love the images and the movement. The subjects look really big to me. If you keep them that size, get rid of the line. If you make them smaller though, the line helps to ground the images. I would suggest making them smaller, keeping the line the same length, and breaking the line around the goose's foot like you do on the girls foot. Good work!
komodori
komodori on Feb 25 '05
Good ideas althestane, that will really help me out when I resubmit this. At least I resisted the urge to plaster text all over my shirt.....that seems to be a problem on this site.
markmayhem
markmayhem on Feb 25 '05
Me and my friends have a running joke about getting chased by geese. This shirt rules so much I'd have to buy a few to pass out.
lusciousMIX
lusciousMIX on Feb 25 '05
ahhhhhhi love this



$.5.
mistic_constellation
mistic_constellation on Feb 25 '05
bwahahaha, attack goose!
bloodrace
bloodrace on Feb 26 '05
brown and yellow should never mix, unless it's in the toilet.
El Chupacabra
El Chupacabra on Feb 26 '05
Sweet. I like the line and the colors. Don't change anything!
vitaminb12
vitaminb12 on Feb 27 '05
i would buy this in an INSTANT!
tunastar
   tunastar on Feb 27 '05
OMG.

That actually happened to me when I was little!

I would buy this immediately.

+5
raconteur
raconteur on Feb 27 '05
Swans terrify me.....I totally like this shirt. If brown looked good on me, Id buy one for myself. Instead, I'll just buy it for my fellow swan hating friend.
momsaysimcool
momsaysimcool on Feb 28 '05
change the colors.
hellohelloworld
hellohelloworld on Feb 28 '05
love the colors! leave them!!! 5+buy!
Genghis
Genghis on Feb 28 '05
aaaaaaaahhhhh run girl run!!!!!!
Chaff
Chaff on Mar 01 '05
the swan is chasing the little girl off the end of the world.
51 days later
Havd0g
Havd0g on Apr 21 '05
Do you know the poem/myth of Leda and the Swan? If you don't it's a pretty amazing coincidence. Reading the poem might make for a better shirt.



It's by Yeats and it describes Zeus taking the form of a swan and raping Leda, a beautiful girl.

41 days later
Eternalgreen
Eternalgreen on Jun 01 '05
This is awesome. Its actually the reason i signed on to threadless... !!!
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