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lol it seems the style of a story that i read wen i was a child, on a "do it by yourself" book...really similar....you take me on my nostalgy^^.
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Its funny but the background is to busy. Its hard to pay attention to what I'm looking at.Tone down the white or get rid of it. the speak bubble too!
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the positioning and size are spot on. i reckon the three colours in the speech bubble make it a little busy. maybe just white and the lighter yellow. blue looks the best for schizzle
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About my design
and do you understand it?
the pulp cries out in desperation when the hedonist dies