How cute, love the style but maybe smaller/not cut by the seams. And not really a need for "cloudy..." text on the shirt. Different size and placement and its cool, on the other hand the alternative placement might work in reality but kinda hard to judge, since you put so much clouds in the image, if only wraparound was possible.
Lose the text and do something more with the clouds. Give them more depth or make them less iconic. Particularly the way they are--assembled in a block below the armpits--the whole design looks really static.
I really, really like it. I'm not sure if I'd buy it though because yeah, it's pretty unflattering when the design is so low. I don't mind the text being there, but how would it look if the C was lowercase?
Love the color scheme and the text could be dropped, but that wouldn't stop me from buying it. I would look more at the two clouds on the side. Those will NOT wrap around the shirt, and they'll come to an aburpt end in a straight line under the arms. Think that over.
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