hearts in the balance
Scoring has ended
The stats
Scoring finished:
2666 days ago
Submitted on:
Feb 08 '05
Comments:
21 comments
Average score:
2.48 from 649 votes
Share with friends
My other submissions
 |
Pity you used the same line of text over and over, would've been a lot cooler if it was all different text. Looks good still though!
|
|
dont use different text. good how it is.
|
 |
i'd like it more if it just said "balance the heart"...but thats just me
|
|
i love the illustration on its own... however, i would rework the text.
|
|
so cool, i like it
|
 |
The text is fine, people. Argh.
I really like the colors. Needs to be larger on the shirt but that's easily taken care of. I like this is a lot. |
|
agree. it should be a paragraph instead of one line. repeating the line over and over makes it brandish or like a band name. make it say one thing if you read it all together and an other entirely if you read only the orange. But make it complete thoughts. "he arts in the balance" doesnt make sense. I definately like how the skeletons and hearts don't look trite. and good composition/use of color
|
|
thanks for the comments everyone. trueisfalse, the text is being used more as a graphical element and the 2 different colors are not meant to be read as different words.
|
 |
gotta say it...im still a sucker for skulls
|
|
wowza, nice
|
|
Lovely colors!!
I'd buy it. |
 |
I like.
|
|
I think it would have more inpact as a bigger graphic. Use the shirt as a frame. I'm all for subtlety but this should be bigger.
|
|
this may be a personal aversion to the heart graphic, but I think the image would be cool without the two little orange hearts
|
 |
i really like it. a LOT. 5$
|
|
really origional i've not seen one like it! 5
|
|
Clean it up
1. Too many patterns of letters and skeletons. I suggest 2 of each. I might buy it. But, there are too many themes about broken hearts. |
|
I really like it, it looks like the same kind of style as those film titles from the early 70s. It's just a really good design!
|
 |
kewl but i wouldnt buy it.
|
|
great skeletons...nice graphics, but i wouldnt wear also
|
You must be logged in to leave a comment.
About my design