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by mikenightmare
Im sure this has been done before but it humors me so I did it. Please leave comments on how to improve.
LaurenB
LaurenB on Feb 08 '05
uhh maybe take out the word beaver and just have patrol? yes it has been done before... frat boys will love it
suckrpnch
suckrpnch on Feb 08 '05
spring break 2005!!
DEZINGOCER ELBANIMODNI
DEZINGOCER ELBANIMODNI on Feb 08 '05
i think it needs teeth. and i mean that literally, boys. also, shadow is perhaps not needed. then again.
k1lohana
k1lohana on Feb 08 '05
perv
buggsuper
buggsuper on Feb 08 '05
I hope they print this because the Gadzooks at the mall was out of this shirt...
mikenightmare
mikenightmare on Feb 08 '05
gadzooks???
theclassybabe
theclassybabe on Feb 09 '05
I really like the concept but i'm not sold on the excecuton. All the lines in the beaver have the same weight--there needs to be more contrast in line weight there. The tail is at a 3/4 perspective, while the rest is two-dimensional...that could probably be fixed just by changing the position of the back leg a bit and adding a hint of the back leg on the far side of the beaver...that way the position would look a bit more natural. I like the detailing on the tail, though. The black of the shadow is a little bit too much, it's inadvertently drawing the eye first. Maybe a crosshatch or a lighter color there. The style of the type doesn't seem to relate much to what you're saying (think: what kind of font would be on police patrol stationary?, etc.), although i do like how the outliney-ness of it keeps it from being too blocky. Also the words are too distant from the rest of the design, they look like a whole separate entity. Sorry for all the wordyness, I just had a huge cuppa coffee! Again, overall a cool idea.
theclassybabe
theclassybabe on Feb 09 '05
P.S. trying giving the Beaver a little more character, i.e....is he a fat Irish cop sort of beaver patroller, or what? Of course if you go at it the other way around, where he's HUNTED by the beaver patrol, maybe he should look a bit more nervous and freeked-out.
theclassybabe
theclassybabe on Feb 09 '05
P.P.S. This is the last one! I swear! Yeah, it's definitely a concept that's been done before but if the beaver has something unique about it, it puts a great new funny twist on it.
kellykel
kellykel on Feb 09 '05
oh yay! I am so glad someone finally came out with a shirt that was

so positive for women! you're so *^%$%&^*! lame!
EnnE
EnnE on Feb 10 '05
try a beaver looking like in a comic
jamco
jamco on Feb 11 '05
Try Tasteless.com, not Threadless.
soygood
soygood on Feb 12 '05
hehehe .. i agree ... NEXT!!
PierceBrosnan
PierceBrosnan on Feb 12 '05
next indeed
ccmtcdnt
ccmtcdnt on Feb 13 '05
haha
madam Q
madam Q on Feb 13 '05
HAHAHAHAHA!! funny.
vanillaxlax
vanillaxlax on Feb 14 '05
anchor blue has shirts like this.
lor3n
lor3n on Feb 15 '05
nasty looking beaver....
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