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lose the text!
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Yes, Lose the Text it sounds very needy.
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I agree. Drop the text and I'd buy.
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i knew the whole drop the txt comments wud come up but without its it didnt cm very special and i think it adds to the design and its mts my tee
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agreed, however, i think the current boldness of the text is sort of intense, perhaps lighten the color of the text or put it behind the manachin or somehting
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Granted it's your tee, but this is a forum for constructive criticism as well as praise. I also agree with losing the text....or at least putting it behind the mannequin...and change the font to something other than courier?
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Very confusing with the text. I could like the text if it was lighter and behind the manachin.
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iv changed the txt and lines 2 a mid grey and moved it behind the dummy and it looks better cheers 4 the advice
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awwww. you spelt colour with a u. awww.
p.s. the doll (mannequin? muse?) should live to see another design. just not this one. |
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OOOOOOOKAY PEOPLE
the text and indea is from the book Invisible Monsters, which is a great book This is a good idea for a t-shirt, but its a horrible execution. |
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i agree
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Lose the text, or make it grungier and more subtle, like more a background texture than the focus.
Also rough up the illustration a little, it's rather passive. Good start though. |
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I love invisible monsters, but...
Well I love playing with those things. I'd prolly buy it. |
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yay people noticed my palahniuk reference iv jst finished the book it was so fuked up but ace, im readin choke now its jst as weird that man has sum serious issues
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i always like playing with these things
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i also wish the drawing model didn't remind me of C3PO. i think it's the lines on the head and that the pose of the model looks confused. at least to me.
i really like the idea of using a drawing model like that though, i just wish there was more to the design. |
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ahh, palahniuk. i like this shirt -keep the text-but not all 3 layers-maybe 2? and yes, better font.
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i, also a palahniuk fan, like the use of the font with the model. however, it does violate copywrite laws. it also needs to be visually reworked.
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not such a fan of the shadow...
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best in grey i like it
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good concept, but too crowded. go for light. lose the text completely or better yet, just use a few lines, keep the font if you so choose, place behind graphic, and there you go. the shadow can be tinkered with to position it further back or even directly behind the graphic. again though, good concept.
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I would buy it. 5$
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makes no sense
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and i dont like the shadow
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I concur. Text = needy. Needy = icky.
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blue
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i like it, including text
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