Liverlove
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2667 days ago
Submitted on:
Feb 07 '05
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Average score:
1.62 from 644 votes
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haha definite 5+buy
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yeah, no clue that was a liver.
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cute idea, not the best execution....I also would have no idea that was a liver without explanation.
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the liver definitely needs some work
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if you didn't say. liver in the title. i wouldn't have gotten it. it would be cool to place the liver around the area it would actually be on a person.
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it IS in the place where your liver is... i would wear it out drinking for irony's sake. i love it and i would buy it.
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a little higher and a little more off center, but i suppose you're right. it would be cool (but absolutely not necessary, just an idea) to put outlines of the other organs, and then have the liver filled in.
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love your p-wing? i think blue looks best but there's definitely something lacking here.
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You might want to grab a few pics of livers off the web to get the outline and contour a bit more refined and accurate...try adding a few creases and details . Nobody's liver has razor sharp points on the ends. If you're gonna go with that font on the type, I'd say try lining up the letters vertically or horizontally a bit better. Overall a good idea, though.
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okay... so i agree it looks like a P-wing. but hell! Mario's liver feels left out too. :oP
and i like the outline idea. if it wins, i'll probably round the sharp edges and make the liver a bit smaller. |
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Make the liver look more like a liver. Until I read the title I was thinking "love your... wing? paint blob?" That's really clever how it would actually be over the wearers liver. I'd get it if the liver was refined. I would leave the font just how it is. 4 for concept (5 and buy if you resubmit it after some work)
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I would almost like it better if it just said
"LOVE YOUR LIVER" straight out instread of having the picture. I mean granted, that is throwing the concept in peoples faces a little...but in a funny way I think. |
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>>>REVISION LINK<<<
is this enough change? what's the consensus? |
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http://homepages.wmich.edu/~e1webb/liverlove.html
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hmmm... not really.
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That's supposed to be a liver? I don't know what one looks like to tell you. I thought this was a weird arrow or something pointing to the left, that would suggest to love whatever or whoever was to your left. Not very clear.
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It takes some people longer to get jokes. Maybe a few extra lines on the liver for definition?
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I do enjoy the concept, please do perfect the liver and I will most definitely buy + for friends!
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Way too big. Try putting the liver life size and where a liver actually is in your body, then put the text about half the size and just above the liver.
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doesnt look like a liver but o well i didnt know what it was until i saw the name.
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i'm starting to wonder how many people know what a liver looks like.
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i knew it was a liver but you might want to fix up the image a bit for the daft folks who don't get it. go with pheliks' suggestion, i think that would look really cool
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