This is my first submission on threadless, and (as you can see), I could really use summa that good ole constructive criticism like mama use to make.

I'd love it across the chest. it's hard to sideways.

whoa x3. it took me a while to figure that out.
i like mind- bending pictures <3.

across the chest would be better

Took me awhile too, but I think its really original and I'd buy it.

Very nice. Would be great for those graffiti/pigstealing days.
5/buy

i like this and i like the placement, i'd buy this for my girlfriend.

why on the side? put it in center and it wouls RAWK my fricken SAWKS

just want to thank all of you for your advice. never thought id get a "5 & buy"... but to respond to patrickula, neoblaze2, and Elizabeth I: it started across the chest, and i thought it looked too boring. if more people think it would be better that way, then i'll try to resubmit it.

very interesting as is, don't move it.

it looks more like a logo than a shirt design personally, but a good logo.

this is an awesome design, but i agree with the above commenters to have it centered.

oh my god it says oink! It took me too long to figure that out. I agree with the majority. Put it on the chest. People read from top to bottom, left to right. You're going to give a lot of people headaches if it stays on the side like that. Awesome graphic. Good relationship between text and image.... hell, the text is the image, you can't get more symbiotic.

yeah across the chest..

i think it's cool on the side. it makes it fun to look at. i think it would catch more people's attention how it is rather than in the center. i would wear this shirt for sure.

woa that took me a wile lol maybe across the chest so its easier to decipher for morons like me but the design is kool

omg! im jewish and i would so wear this shirt!!! but most definitly put it across the chest, go pigs!!

i like the pink one

That is awesome. But yah, horizontal please.

yes. horizontal.

pink is way better. and flip it so it reads left to right :B other than that, wicked design, v cute :D

looks too much like a disgestive system to me. I'm not feelin' it. sorry.

leave it as is, it's awesome. i love the fact that it takes a while to figure out what it says. blue shirt.

i like the pink one. it's good

its awesome i love pigs!!!!!! $5

awesum just do it across the chest. ill b watching out 4 ure designs!

Love it, but maybe make it more distinguishable.

i like the placement as now
very cool
5+buy

Thats awesome!

NOT ACROSS THE CHEST NOT ACROSS THE CHEST

I like to avoid attention to the chest at all costs.

I LOVE it on the sides.

Like, seriously love.

5 and buy.

please tell me thats not pig intesten

to the few that asked, no, it's not intestines, nor purposely made to look like intestines. if you need to categroize the extra lines, think of them as wrinkles. some pigs aren't that pretty. thank you again for all of your comments...i'm still unsure about the placement, because friends i link and ask about i tall choose its current place, and i like it there myself, and from getting enthusiasm from those such as ofthecoast (who, i have to thank, because my day was made by that comment) about keeping it as is. but, any more comments would be appreciated (and obsessed over).

looks good

i dont get what you mean about extra lines, this design is bang on, i agree keep it away from the chest, if you had to make it horozontal, do it where it is, both colours rock, keep it up. 5

i want this!