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Dressed To Kill

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Feb 07 '05
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tweedsonpatroll

About my design

by tweedsonpatroll
I wanted to do something simple, that portrays how you feel when you're steppin out. Here's a link to the close up http://www.livejournal.com/users/kama_aina/
The Domo
The Domo on Feb 08 '05
I think this calls for a central placement. The line-work looks really shakey and could use a clean-up. Consider dropping the outline of the parts and just going for a plain vector. There's potential there, though.
LaurenB
LaurenB on Feb 08 '05
uhhh you feel like carrying a small sword when youre steppin out? i like the colors and her hair and i like the sword placement but the left foot placement bothers me. i agree that the lines could use some clean up, but other than that, i like the idea.
wastingspace64
wastingspace64 on Feb 08 '05
I like it. The grey/graphite color is the best.
suckrpnch
suckrpnch on Feb 08 '05
definitely center. love the graphic.
soygood
soygood on Feb 08 '05
I count atleast 5 colours though .



and er thats a pretty stupid way to carry a sword I mean youll be ripping up the wall paper everwhere you go .



akaufman
akaufman on Feb 08 '05
Like the graphic, but the foot you can see is very boxy, and the pink hair sort of looks like someone put a leaf on her head.

tweedsonpatroll
tweedsonpatroll on Feb 08 '05
yeah this is a drawing of my sister, that's the way her feet were, and thats what toe shoes look like from behind, I know it needs linework and I shouldve spent more time on it. . .
stonenostalgia
stonenostalgia on Feb 09 '05
the hair needs work-and the sword placement is weird-maybe put it on her back with a little carrier thing? more....vertical....

i think that made sense

otherwise it's cute
crimes
crimes on Feb 09 '05
I see potential.
leafygreen
leafygreen on Feb 10 '05
Good idea but the hair needs to be fixed up - looks like a pink banana peel on her head
arisearise
arisearise on Feb 10 '05
her bottom half seems so crisp, and the top seems so dull..
blue_fusion
blue_fusion on Feb 11 '05
i like the idea...alot. but i think mabey you should dress her a little different and mabey her holding the knife behind her back.....as for the way she dresses more...like "Slutty"
ccmtcdnt
ccmtcdnt on Feb 13 '05
very japanese and I love it 5 & B
i love sweaters
i love sweaters on Feb 13 '05
why would i want to wear this?
Maggie_Lucy
Maggie_Lucy on Feb 13 '05
i like blue_fusion's idea
overandoverture
overandoverture on Feb 13 '05
not too fond of the daggar/blade, but 5+buy regardless.
Epitome
Epitome on Feb 13 '05
Its like a killing , i dont like it
PierceBrosnan
PierceBrosnan on Feb 14 '05
I would love it without the sword
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