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Dats Some Fiiiine Hippity Hop

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Reubs

About my design

by Reubs
Almost added text, but couldn't find anything that didn't sound too stuupid.



My first submission. Go easy on me. ;-)
alconic
alconic on Feb 01 '05
is cool but

the man is without one hand...
Reubs
Reubs on Feb 01 '05
Heh heh, Indeed.



I got hungry, so I lopped it off and ate it.



Actually, the hand is so positioned (as a result of his jive styles ) that it is hidden mostly by his sleeve. Also, being in silhouette, you can't really see where the sleeve ends and hand begins.



But really, it's supposed to be semi-abstract - you didn't mention that the girl has no fingers on her left hand. Or that her left foot is cloven, like a farmyard critter. Oink.



Give it up for the handless homie. They're people too y'know.
the pretentious
the pretentious on Feb 01 '05
i'd like to see the other hand, and i'm not a fan of the shirt color, but i'll give you a 5&buy anways
Reubs
Reubs on Feb 01 '05
So the Ayes have it. The hands anyways.



Thanks for the input guys, wouldn't mind hearing other feedback. I could certainly offer a lot myself:



Better positioned further north,

Too dark,

Too small,

Too simple,

Needs something else, maybe a robot/heart/cute-furry-thing.



The list goes on, but I won't. Let me know what YOU reckon.

Thanks.
yumanti
yumanti on Feb 01 '05
needs some simple background noise. perhaps those footprint dance step thingys. be subliminal w/ the steps too.
alconic
alconic on Feb 02 '05
hey...

i love the title!



i agree with the too dark

but maybe is too simple the style of the design

dont add robot or anything cute

katherinechiu
katherinechiu on Feb 03 '05
I like the design. Maybe you could add an image of a light-colored record behind them.
Reubs
Reubs on Feb 04 '05
Thanks for the suggestions. Will keep them in mind.



Haels
Haels on Feb 04 '05
I like it! but the colour seems a bit 'out there' for you reubs...?..
eritain
eritain on Feb 04 '05
Put it on a medium blue and I'd buy it. Add footsteps if you like, but not big blatant ones.
Charf
Charf on Feb 05 '05
I like the design but the placement is a little weird.
sydelbow
sydelbow on Feb 05 '05
I love the guy!

The color is a little harsh, and I would make the image larger and centered. Way hip!!
tricklingdust
tricklingdust on Feb 06 '05
Add a few music notes. :D I like it in the corner it's in, I wouldn't move it. The color though is a bit bright though. Don't know what I'd suggest though. Do make the people bigger- it'd be great to see them in more detail. 5&Buy
Reubs
Reubs on Feb 07 '05
I'm an out there kind of guy.



Thanks for the input all, there will certainly be revisions.



Bonzai!
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