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Ash Sammy
soldiers and their stomachs
55 slices
drinking blood and sweat
not sure what its worth when their enemies praise their architecture
but they know just as much as others that the sleeping don\'t feel a thing
ileviyou
ileviyou on Feb 01 '05
the excess of lines almost feel as though they're acting as distractions rather than being helpful to the design. the colors, they aren't doing it for me, and though it may be a matter of personal preference, the red on the blue is too much of a contrast to be comfortable to look at. the text bubble is too bold on a design of mostly thin lines so that the text looks out of place.

the prose comment that goes with the t-shirt is probably better than the shirt design itself, and i definitely enjoy the thought that went into this. it seems like there is a clever metaphor here that i'm missing , and would give the shirt a lot more meaning if i understood it. what's the metaphor of the numbers?

still, a neat idea, but attempts to do too many things at once to be really successful.
Ash Sammy
Ash Sammy on Feb 01 '05
full version here:
http://www.coroflot.com/individual/preview_portfolio_file.asp?y=n&preview=true&order_no=1&t=
Ash Sammy
Ash Sammy on Feb 01 '05
oops here:
http://www.coroflot.com/public/portfolio_file.asp?user_id=70303&portfolio_id=86906&increment=false&order_no=1&t=
Ash Sammy
Ash Sammy on Feb 01 '05
the stomach is the map and the soldiers are the most part of the map because this country feeds on devoted man power (soldiers and bullets outlined in red) to defend their country, the stomach refers to the US map, and its sliced to 55 states, and if none, any or all of what i say is not true, then i don't like it more than you do.
ileviyou
ileviyou on Feb 02 '05
i hate to be ignorant, but the united states has fifty five states?
Ash Sammy
Ash Sammy on Feb 02 '05
its actually 50, there are more which aren't considered states
Reubs
Reubs on Feb 03 '05
It's certainly interesting.
I like the numbers, reminds of one of those coloring thingumees.
I like the mas of thin lines, but am not too sure about the patches of solid color, they do crowd the lines for attention.
Levi makes some good points.
Has some promise, look forward to seeing more of your work.
yayfuzzyslippers
yayfuzzyslippers on Feb 03 '05
Eww this is way too busy and the colors are blinding...
124 days later
Springfish
   Springfish on Jun 08 '05
you suck
4 days later
Ash Sammy
Ash Sammy on Jun 13 '05
Springfish, you seem to have posted this very opinion on every of my submissions.
I am sorry that try to compensate in this way, any damage you suffered from my opinions on your StabbyMcKnife T, this isn't a way to achieve peace. Your Stabby T promotes violence.
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