soldiers and their stomachs

55 slices

drinking blood and sweat

not sure what its worth when their enemies praise their architecture

but they know just as much as others that the sleeping don\'t feel a thing

the excess of lines almost feel as though they're acting as distractions rather than being helpful to the design. the colors, they aren't doing it for me, and though it may be a matter of personal preference, the red on the blue is too much of a contrast to be comfortable to look at. the text bubble is too bold on a design of mostly thin lines so that the text looks out of place.



the prose comment that goes with the t-shirt is probably better than the shirt design itself, and i definitely enjoy the thought that went into this. it seems like there is a clever metaphor here that i'm missing , and would give the shirt a lot more meaning if i understood it. what's the metaphor of the numbers?



still, a neat idea, but attempts to do too many things at once to be really successful.

full version here:

http://www.coroflot.com/individual/preview_portfolio_file.asp?y=n&preview=true&order_no=1&t=

oops here:

http://www.coroflot.com/public/portfolio_file.asp?user_id=70303&portfolio_id=86906&increment=false&order_no=1&t=

the stomach is the map and the soldiers are the most part of the map because this country feeds on devoted man power (soldiers and bullets outlined in red) to defend their country, the stomach refers to the US map, and its sliced to 55 states, and if none, any or all of what i say is not true, then i don't like it more than you do.

i hate to be ignorant, but the united states has fifty five states?

its actually 50, there are more which aren't considered states

It's certainly interesting.

I like the numbers, reminds of one of those coloring thingumees.

I like the mas of thin lines, but am not too sure about the patches of solid color, they do crowd the lines for attention.

Levi makes some good points.

Has some promise, look forward to seeing more of your work.

Eww this is way too busy and the colors are blinding...

you suck

Springfish, you seem to have posted this very opinion on every of my submissions.

I am sorry that try to compensate in this way, any damage you suffered from my opinions on your StabbyMcKnife T, this isn't a way to achieve peace. Your Stabby T promotes violence.