I'd paint the grey sky blue.

This is very minimal piece. I like that.

I think that the only thing that has weaken your design is that strange flipper.

You never cease to amaze me :D! <3

saw your posting in the TP group. I really like this shirt, and I would buy it if it got printed. THe only thing I am iffy about is those weir d bubbles falling down on the left side under that cloudlike thing.

i thought about that flipper too, but anatomically, it actually is correct. i will definitely rework that though. the bubbles were supposed to be linking that part to the eggs under the fishh.?

thanks for constructive criticism, thank youu.

hahaha i see the fisheggss

the bubbles on the left are a bit awkward because it traps the space inbetween

and it would warp if a girl wore it, and the drops would place kind of weird there too

ompph! i see what you mean about space.

mm the alternative, for me would've been to place the bubblish ones along the fishing line, leading to the fish's mouth.

would that be alright?

omgoodness it's a fish! it's me! haha jk. :p

joy i love it! i like the flipper, the clouds, and the eggs. hm my advice would be to move the cloud lower a little more, then it would look better if you imagine a girl wearing it. =)

yes, i'll lower the cloud.

thank youu

lovely

I like it! The bubbles should go, though, perhaps you could add a splash of water by the tail fins, just to tie it back to the cloud. You know how the eye kinda moves in a triangel, and it's easier to "read" a picture if there's something that brings you back to the point where you started looking (usually top left corner, ie the cloud in your design).

Great design, though, and I'd love it on a baby blue tee.

I think the way that you worked the shape of the egg into the clouds works well to link back to the eggs under the fish, so perhaps losing the bubbles under the cloud wouldn't be a problem? This is a lovely design and with a little reworking I'd buy it.

ok, sounds good.

consider the bubbles lost, and the cloud lowered, i believe.

i'll post a reworked picture sometime soon!

thank you for the comments it helps me :)

joy dear you rock. i'd always support your work. :D

this is whimzy-clumzy (not a good thing)

what is whimzy-clumzy?

and how do i improve on something that is whimzy-clumzy?

be constructive please :)

i don't know what the three bubbles are on the top left, and i get lost looking at the line connecting in between not sure whether the main point is up or down or where should i start looking for the whole point of the whimzy-clumzy illst. whether this is underwater or not and why there aren't any fish around, and if it is underwater then how come there are little wave circles cause waves happen on surface only, and after all that puzzle graphical-reaction I can be quite sure whether i was right afterall, or whether my thinking was a time investment or "I should i give it another" is just another waste-of-time-crazy-idea, now i've been through this for such a long time now, and i should finally decide which decision will ease my troubled mind, and so i decided to give you 5 zeros, and wish you good luck.

:)

btw, is that a shell?

a shell? it's supposed to be a cloud, unless you're talking about something else.

mm, i was really hoping you'd give some criticism about design aside from the bubbles which have already been removed from the design that i'm finalizing. you've given me suggestions about content but the idea was surrealism, so the idea was that it would not be entirely logical. i suppose it is whimsy too.

thanks for the comment though.



good luck to you too!

i simply love it,