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he is flipping a buffalo nickle isnt he, i know he is and if he is ill rate it a five and buy
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why don't you connect the woman to the rest of the image? With the street, a sidewalk, or other...
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i agree w/ coment above... over all i like it but something connecting the women to the rest of the design would unify the image and make it look less like she was floating in the air randomly
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Yes...maybe a pool of light to connect them?
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darker grey, if not black lamp post
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nice
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Shady.
Buying a hooker? I like. And yes. connectconnectconnect. x4. |
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proletarian on Jan 24 '05 this is excellent. leave it as it is.
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wooo nice design.... like the colours n the illustration.. nicely done... help me comment on my design too!!
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i'm not really sure but maybe make it a lido bigger
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TOO EMO . 0
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I love it, especially the streetlamp, but it does need something connecting the woman and the rest - and perhaps a different color for the woman too.
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im really likin the feel and pallette of this one, nice work.
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i like the colors... however, definetly connect the chick.
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How is a scene that looks like a gangster movie emo? Of the hundreds of overwhelmingly emo submissions, I don't think this qualifies as emo. The dude's wearing a trenchcoat not a white belt.
I like the street lamp, looks like New Orleans. Nice work. |
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That's tight. 5 &buy.
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Make it bigger and I'd purchase it.
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a connecting street edge perhaps, the 5 + buy
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i really like the theme of this one. it's original.
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I think you should place the whole image in the center of the shirt and make it a little bigger. It's very lovely! 5 & I'd definitely buy!
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Very cool theme. Maybe position and composition tweaking would help but I'd buy it like this if printed.
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colors good, make it mor obvious that it's a coin floating above his hand (bigger design?)
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sucky ass shirt
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this is freaking amazing! i love the lighting effect.
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Very cool!
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watch your back, a hooker? in the night? FBI? gun?
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OR, watch your back there is hooker in the night, with a gun and she is undercover FBI-agent! ;-) the point :)
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yeah this has potential...i'd maybe make the woman larger and closer, the pool of light idea might be interesting...it looks like you only have 3 colors so far, that could be the 4th...anyway she does kind of seem to be floating right now. but the film noir thing is great...reminds me of "the big sleep" or something...who called this emo? what are ya, crazy?
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i like it....simple is better is my prerogative
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ray of light... the street lamp makes it
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I especially like the ornate street lamp!! I'd like to see just the lamp on a tee.
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i don't know... not my thing.
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Leave the girl disconnected, but give her more detail from lowlight from the street lamp(clothing details, maybe hair, nothing more). Other than that, not bad. 4
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traceface on Jan 25 '05 Thanks for the positive feedback and suggestions!
If you would like to see the design with some of the suggested changes, you can go here: http://www.blazerettes.com/gangstalight.jpg I added a beam of light and a sidewalk. |
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it looks kinda odd.. something about the woman is a little odd
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i love the idea... i looked at the updated version of it too... i think it would look better if you chose just the beam of light (maybe widen the beam a little?) or the sidewalk... it's a killer shirt though... i would buy it if you chose between the two...
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maybe change placement to lower right or left of the shirt and i'd buy it.
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cool just as is
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damn i love it, ill buy it
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Not bad, possibly some sort of shadow from the woman might make her feel a bit more connected to the scene. Possibly a bit small too, as i feel that top left area feels like an emblem on a football (soccer) shirt.
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I'd like the image to be centered, but otherwise, I want to marry it.
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i like your first version better.
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yeah its great
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OH MY GOD.
this WILL win. <3 |
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I love the Dublin street lamp.
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in-freaking-credible. love the noir mentality.
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The design seems too small. I like the graphic, but I think it would work better bigger.
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i <3 it...like wOoh
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Seriously pretty shirt. the colors oooh pretty. I'll go for this as is, 5/$
Scaled up with some more context between the two figures, something to add depth, all good. While I adore the simplicity of this design, it would be sweet to see some different iterations. |
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Usually I say to make things smaller but this one I would like better if the image was bigger. I like the pool of light idea too, but either way i love it and I'd buy it. +5
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OOOH! I checked out your page with the changes and they are very nice!
I'd still by the shirt with this sumbission tho. |
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Bigger, sidewalk, center it. LOVE. lovelovelove. Did I mention that I love it? As you've probably assumed, 5&buy.
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PS. no beam of light.
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make it bigger - i'd def buy it if it took up the whole side!
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A little on the shady side,must be in the big easy.and youbetter watch your back side.
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this reminds me of london, indeed !
missed you at DA, really like to see some work of you... and you know what !? I've seen you in a movie, really can't exactly remember how you look like, but nearly 89,5% like the receptionist of "live extension" company in the film "vanilla sky" ... incredible ... but this is not the right place to post kind of this messages, so sorry and maybe see you at DA .. |
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