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Jan 24 '05
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Oehrlein49

About my design

by Oehrlein49
no explanation; it is what it is
koyman
koyman on Jan 24 '05
like the concept, don't like the execution. something with the shadows and hair. maybe not black shirt. maybe another shade (gray) in there. not sure.
Thuglife Baldwin
Thuglife Baldwin on Jan 26 '05
IS that clive owen? hahahaha
damntheman
damntheman on Jan 27 '05
Alright so I’m totally loving this but if you could do 2 things....



Make the cherry of the cigarette red/orange



Make the smoke just the teeniest bit more dramatic and smoke-like. If the lines of the smoke where differently drawn(more smokey) than the lines of the man I think the appeal the of the shirt would increase.



I would buy it as is though and I hope I haven’t offended you with my comment because it really is a very good design.
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Oehrlein49
Oehrlein49 on Jan 29 '05
damntheman: i appreciate the feeback, but i don't think ill be resubmitting. i don't think enough people like it anyways so i think it's more trouble than it's worth
no_reason
no_reason on Jan 31 '05
i kinda like it..........but he's sketchy with that beard. i'd like it better if he didn't have one.
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