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I'm not a fan of the placement or the formatting of the text--a different font perhaps, maybe not as boxy, really anything to get rid of a hyphenated word on a t-shirt.
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great idea of guitar/heart illustration but poorly executed. text idea is good but think about taking one segment and enlarge it instead of using a paragraph.
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i like the guitar/heart thing, but not on the shoulder. i dont really care for the sentimentality of the text either...
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