great illustration, but it seems very quicksilver and pacific sunwear. wouldn't buy it but it looks pretty good.

well put

Didn't like it at first. Very very fine piece of work indeed, love the detail. Gonna hate myself saying this but... you don't need the text

she sorta creeps me out..

reminds me of something at oldnavy but its fresh as hell though good job

it reminds me of those dragon shirts that i would see 5th grade boys wearing

nah, too busy.

ooh i luv it! great picture, but maybe change/scrap the text. :D

yeah.. lose the text, make the image smaller and center it.

Oh...I buy it - for sure !!

5+buy



http://www.threadless.com/submission/30791/Flame

Like way way too busy man

I appreciate that a lot of work went inot the graphic, but not for me.

The design is nice, but it's really too busy. It tends to distract.

i would love it with out the type, just the pic - 4

The design on its own merits gets a 5 from me. It is really cool, nice drawing, nice colours.



I wouldn't wear it (it's not me) but there is some real skill in the drawing. Nice work.

It's really nice, no doubt, but the girl DOES look kind of scary and the shirt DOES look like there's too many of it in stores already.

This looks like a bunch of T's I could find at PAC SUN, and the drawing is bad.... BUT, your type design is great! keep at it.

a little too generic.

2 words

corporate whore

5 for the design, its really great, i think you can work for a surf wear trend, if you dont already do...

Gah... ORANGE GIRLS???



Promoting the oompa-loompas??



Not into it. Sorry.

It doesn't look like a threadless shirt. I suggest submitting it to Target or Pac Sun's summer line.

nice, great style.

you should work as a souvenir/gift shop designer. seriously.

i think the shirt might be better w/ just the girl on her own minus the text and background . . . i think it is just a little too busy. but the illustration is great. you have a f-ing dope style but you do seem to have tendancy to go a little overboard. i think your work is a perfect example of less sometimes being more. you illustrations are amazing and really don't need all the bells and whistles. i give it a 4 as is . . . but i would say 5 + buy for just the girl . . . i love that she had this kind of creepy doll-like face. nice work.

dont like the style, but it had work, 3pt colega

i like it but lose the text

pretty cool design, not for threadless...

i live in hawaii.



i really hate all the dumb perceptions of hawaii.



i refuse to EVER wear a shirt that says hawaii.



as for your design, it's okay, except the colors kind of remind me of, well, yeah. . .and it's sort of busy and my eyes kind of go crazy

too confused

old navy anyone

I'd like to take this moment to apologize to the Threadless.com community, and to the state of Hawaii, for creating and submitting such an offensive design. I'd like to thank those strong viewers who had the courage to continue living after viewing such a strong image. The truly "creative" and "unique" "individuals" most certainly didn't have the strength to survive, and thus they left useless redundant comments to show everyone their overall "awesomeness" and great skills in critiquing. Perhaps in the future I'll draw something left-handed so it looks anti-pop, to please the beasts. If you want to judge a shirt strictly on the basis of other shirts and brands existing, then that's your deal I guess....

I say keep the text on, move to Hawaii, take the submission off Threadless and get the tees printed yourself. You could make like $2 each!

nice man

3

it's like some wierd tattoo, but cool.



maybe maori instead of hawaiian?

i am in love.

with your style that is.