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i think it would look best without the textand frame. then the shirt would look like there was a face in it or something.
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lose the white (borders too), like the words "deep rogue ram" but don't like the font. love the face.
maybe if the words were taking their form from the pixels in the face? |
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I thought White Noise also. I was trying to find some sorta hidden message in the words and I found it. Ha.
Anyway, lose the white and I'd consider it. |
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had you lost the border and the text... made the face a lighter red (almost similar to the scarlet tee) instead of yellow I'd buy it and give you a 5... as it stands, I won't
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yeah i agree with rmorris but have the black be the color of the shirt so the image is pixilating out of the shirt. you must develop the text so it is integrated or drop it
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Yes, in this case if the dots just spread and faded out around head it would be more effective. Nice concept.
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Hehehe, great wordplay. The second I got that I knew that I wanted it. 4+$, but when I'm not wearing it, it'll have to stay DEEP in my closet, lest it come out at night and deep rogue ram me.
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Just as I was thinking "lose the text", I saw a comment that said just that. Also, enlarge image to 141 percent or so. Full Face!
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