I agree with Frickinawesome. The dog needs to be on the front. I also think the kid in the ghost costume is detracting from the joke. His body language seriously confuses me. Is he trying to get candy from the other kid? Give him candy? If he's just there to indicate that the kids are trick-or-treating, I think he should be in a less active pose so that the other kid and the fire hydrant are the main focus.
Still, great idea and nice illustration and colors!
I like the dog on the back, the joke is completely understandable w/o the dog, the back image is just a treat (no puns intended). agree with zipple about the ghost, but 5 anyway.
Zen Studio
In case don't dig it.....a drippy drip dog in back will help :DD
Great on gold and light blue....
FRICKINAWESOME
Funny! Think it would be stronger with the whole joke on the front though.
Zen Studio
Thanks fricinawesome :)
ANCU
awesome joke!
YaaH
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alexmdc
hahaha
ndikol
hahahahahaha!
skitchman
cool!
Zen Studio
thanks guys :)
rompetelcuero
jajajajajaja
zipple
I agree with Frickinawesome. The dog needs to be on the front. I also think the kid in the ghost costume is detracting from the joke. His body language seriously confuses me. Is he trying to get candy from the other kid? Give him candy? If he's just there to indicate that the kids are trick-or-treating, I think he should be in a less active pose so that the other kid and the fire hydrant are the main focus.
Still, great idea and nice illustration and colors!
Aaron.Randy
hehehe
Zen Studio
zipple...he supposed to say " i told you man" :)
cherry_jellybean
I like the dog on the back, the joke is completely understandable w/o the dog, the back image is just a treat (no puns intended). agree with zipple about the ghost, but 5 anyway.
Zen Studio
Actually ghost is showing that's it's halloween trick and treat.....he supposed to say," I told you man."
bottleHeD
Lol, super funny!
ammar saya
Really nice
Critique mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/78100/the_shoe
craziemutant
I think if the dog were lower back, it'd look nice.
Zen Studio
thanks for critiques....:)
mirisch
Funee!
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