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Last of the Bunny Clouds

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Sep 30 '10
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3.13 from 1,106 votes
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I remember as a kid watching the smoke blowing out of a factory, and mixing with all the white fluffy clouds in the air. At the time it seemed to eat them up. I thought it might make a fun and meaningful design to show this wolf like creature eating up the white fluffy bunny clouds. Thanks for looking at it guys.
Flying Mouse
   Flying Mouse on Sep 30 '10
Lovely concept. It will be cool if it was an airplane or a group of birds instead of the "cloud rabbit".
skitchman
skitchman on Sep 30 '10
agree with FM!Nice
inkslinger007
inkslinger007 on Sep 30 '10
i like the cloud rabbit :3

the whole concept is cool.
Ogamendonca
Ogamendonca on Sep 30 '10
Wow! Great…5!
Please take a look at my design:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/298914/Thriller
A92Crew
A92Crew on Sep 30 '10
nice
77degrees
77degrees on Sep 30 '10
clever concept
stephalopolis
stephalopolis on Oct 01 '10
That's a powerful design. I love how it doesn't look like a specific animal, just monstrous. It's amazing :)
lacyluwho
lacyluwho on Oct 01 '10
I disagree, I like the rabbit! more original =)
artbelle
artbelle on Oct 01 '10
Very strong concept.It could be on tee or posters.Love it.5$
pia.tra
   pia.tra on Oct 01 '10
cool. 5
YaaH
   YaaH on Oct 01 '10
4
ANCU
ANCU on Oct 01 '10
ether way it's relevant :)
rabbits or birds :) It's nature.


5$
Seami
Seami on Oct 01 '10
Really love these designs that convey a message, this one is great, only thing i could say would be maybe a different colour for the actual shirt $4
tommywaspe
tommywaspe on Oct 01 '10
yeah!
Anything Goes
   Anything Goes on Oct 01 '10
Great idea!
mullmuggins
mullmuggins on Oct 01 '10
I like this, and I like that it is smoke eating cloud, it adds to the fantastical feel. I'm not so keen on the box shape of the design though, it doesn't sit well on the shirt, for me.

Nice concept though.
midgerock
midgerock on Oct 01 '10
really symbollic and well executed design. +5
klog
klog on Oct 01 '10
I rally like the concept, including the bunny cloud, but I agree with mullmuggins about the box.
scibeck
scibeck on Oct 01 '10
This is awesome! $5 for me. As a science educator, and artist, this is the type of design I want to buy from Threadless; artistic and meaningful on a variety of levels...thought provoking and not boring!
HoneyBakedHammer
HoneyBakedHammer on Oct 01 '10
I want to wear it. I also agree with the box comment, but I would buy and wear it anyway.
soloyo
soloyo on Oct 01 '10
Get rid of the rectangle , place it on a sky blue shirt
You'll get a print!
5
robotwaste
robotwaste on Oct 01 '10
Sky blue shirt, and redesign so that the factory is lower on the shirt with the cloud of smog going higher into the chest area and I think you have a print.

Nice job.
Cyrana
Cyrana on Oct 01 '10
bloody brilliant.
tomaHAWK9
tomaHAWK9 on Oct 01 '10
$5!!!! love it!

if you would, please critique my designs, thanks!
Diving Deep
Midnight Balloon Chase
weja
weja on Oct 01 '10
i feel for the sky bunnies and, in related news, like this shirt alot (:
cherry_jellybean
cherry_jellybean on Oct 01 '10
Love the design, but totally agree about the boxiness of the design. Would look beautiful on a sky blue shirt with the design melting into it.
Drew Doom
Drew Doom on Oct 01 '10
This reminds me of Watership Down.
Mosquito88
Mosquito88 on Oct 01 '10
I love it! too bad it's so square!
traviseldon
traviseldon on Oct 01 '10
like it a bunch but lose the box... maybe make the sky portion bigger with a circular top... i love that blue so more of that in an arch with the smog beast lunging in that same shape, if that makes sense...
fabricator
fabricator on Oct 01 '10
I agree with everyone here. The box is terrible. I should have done that differently. Thanks for the critique guys.
R_Babby
R_Babby on Oct 01 '10
This is and AMAZING concept and design! Accept for the box thing, I would say this is perfect! It's definitely the best environmental message design I've ever seen.
xaca
xaca on Oct 01 '10
nice!
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Oct 01 '10
Yup, people already covered what i was gonna add to the convo:

Ditch the box, put it on a sky blue shirt, make the rabbit a bit more "cloudy" looking and you have a winner and then some.
HaikuFlash
HaikuFlash on Oct 01 '10
I think the bunny cloud is great. It harkens to imagination and childhood. Maybe a different color shirt would appeal to ladies on this one. Great job.
EN AJUSTES
EN AJUSTES on Oct 01 '10
Great illo, just needs to integrate better into the shirt. Keep 'em coming!
novawuff
novawuff on Oct 02 '10
always bunnies with you. ;}
Konceptsketcher
Konceptsketcher on Oct 02 '10
The illustration is great, but i'm not so sure about the "framing". It's too square.
hotspot
hotspot on Oct 02 '10
cool! only the clouds would also be great!
bricycle
bricycle on Oct 02 '10
Love the concept! $5
wullagaru
   wullagaru on Oct 02 '10
as some have said Im not a fan of teh boxieness but love the concept, style and art.

if you could find a way to incorporate the design into teh shirt a little better youd have a winner
lofty softy
   lofty softy on Oct 02 '10
really nice
Shockin Goblin
Shockin Goblin on Oct 02 '10
like it! but i think the picture should be a little higher up the tee - just my own preference though
Spohronia
Spohronia on Oct 02 '10
Very nice! $5
permadi_31
permadi_31 on Oct 02 '10
nice concept
jackmcw
jackmcw on Oct 02 '10
cool work!
I'd be tempted to create a shape with the blue rather then a rectangle or square.
Frosby
   Frosby on Oct 03 '10
genius idea, and love the style. I agree with the comments about removing the box. 5!
adam.loves.eve
adam.loves.eve on Oct 03 '10
no, i like the rabit. clouds are what the smoke destroys...not planes. nice design, it would be sweet if you could eliminate the rectangle and give it an 'all over' kinda look.
kharmazero
kharmazero on Oct 03 '10
i love it too
Dr poPcoRN
Dr poPcoRN on Oct 03 '10
great concept!
C Kid
   C Kid on Oct 03 '10
Love the colors and love the style! Great illustration too. As most of the others I don't like the box. I would like to see it bigger on the shirt too. 3 for now. But with some changes I would score this a five. Redesign and resub. :)
pickupRINGO
pickupRINGO on Oct 03 '10
love the concept oand how it is executed only i dont know about the square
4$!
jess4002
jess4002 on Oct 03 '10
greattt! 5$
sivank_m
sivank_m on Oct 03 '10
i love it, but o think you should use the shirt format and not trap the design on a box.
phraze
   phraze on Oct 03 '10
Nice. Subtle and very cool..
Jemae
   Jemae on Oct 03 '10
cool concept5$! :)
krew21
krew21 on Oct 03 '10
amazing!!!! 5$
Finho One
Finho One on Oct 03 '10
great concept. 5$
Zen Studio
Zen Studio on Oct 03 '10
good without box....
edgarscratch
edgarscratch on Oct 03 '10
man thi is yiihaaa
moviereplicars
moviereplicars on Oct 04 '10
very creative, love it
arber
arber on Oct 04 '10
like pink floyd ! god job man ;)
arber
arber on Oct 04 '10
good* sorry :D
Qndreas
Qndreas on Oct 04 '10
Would have loved to see it on a blue tshirt. Get rid of the triangle. Nice work anyways.
seankimber
seankimber on Oct 04 '10
this would be better if the shirt was the same colour as the sky...but i swtill wish i could do something that cool
WEAREYAWN
WEAREYAWN on Oct 04 '10
great idea!!!!
Plu Shu
Plu Shu on Oct 04 '10
For once, the boxed shape is ok for me, it makes it more cinematographic. Cool stuff!
Shaun Stroup
Shaun Stroup on Oct 04 '10
Awesome idea.
TheUsernameCuddleFish
TheUsernameCuddleFish on Oct 04 '10
Awesome! I'd wear it !
Vividsparrow
Vividsparrow on Oct 04 '10
Absolutely Amazing =)
Ecw321
Ecw321 on Oct 04 '10
This is a great concept, and it's beautifully executed. However, I'd love to see the design bigger or placed differently on the shirt.
Spirantula
Spirantula on Oct 04 '10
conceptually awesome!
silva_rafaela
silva_rafaela on Oct 06 '10
Great design!
anivini
   anivini on Oct 06 '10
AWESOME CONCEPT !!!
Caroline_Elisa
Caroline_Elisa on Oct 06 '10
5! (Once you ditch the box!) Since you have a clear division, perhaps the top half could be blue, the bottom brown?
rompetelcuero
   rompetelcuero on Oct 07 '10
Powerful idea.
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