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Lovely concept. It will be cool if it was an airplane or a group of birds instead of the "cloud rabbit".
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That's a powerful design. I love how it doesn't look like a specific animal, just monstrous. It's amazing :)
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Really love these designs that convey a message, this one is great, only thing i could say would be maybe a different colour for the actual shirt $4
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Sky blue shirt, and redesign so that the factory is lower on the shirt with the cloud of smog going higher into the chest area and I think you have a print.
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$5!!!! love it!
if you would, please critique my designs, thanks! Diving Deep Midnight Balloon Chase |
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Love the design, but totally agree about the boxiness of the design. Would look beautiful on a sky blue shirt with the design melting into it.
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I agree with everyone here. The box is terrible. I should have done that differently. Thanks for the critique guys.
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This is and AMAZING concept and design! Accept for the box thing, I would say this is perfect! It's definitely the best environmental message design I've ever seen.
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Yup, people already covered what i was gonna add to the convo:
Ditch the box, put it on a sky blue shirt, make the rabbit a bit more "cloudy" looking and you have a winner and then some. |
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I think the bunny cloud is great. It harkens to imagination and childhood. Maybe a different color shirt would appeal to ladies on this one. Great job.
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as some have said Im not a fan of teh boxieness but love the concept, style and art.
if you could find a way to incorporate the design into teh shirt a little better youd have a winner |
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like it! but i think the picture should be a little higher up the tee - just my own preference though
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no, i like the rabit. clouds are what the smoke destroys...not planes. nice design, it would be sweet if you could eliminate the rectangle and give it an 'all over' kinda look.
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this would be better if the shirt was the same colour as the sky...but i swtill wish i could do something that cool
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This is a great concept, and it's beautifully executed. However, I'd love to see the design bigger or placed differently on the shirt.
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5! (Once you ditch the box!) Since you have a clear division, perhaps the top half could be blue, the bottom brown?
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