her finger placement seems a little awkward, but nicely done.

i love the meshed rose!

Reposition so that her fingers pinch wearer's nipple.

it would be cool if you turned her deformed hand into a prickly vine that extended over the left shoulder. i like the design and the colors.

The hand looks weird, but other than that it's really good.

I love everything but that hand.

what's with all the random women on shirts?
i like the art, but i wouldn't wear it.

fix the hand and i would buy.

I get the hand, although without a corner, it looks off. And the clip art rose needs to go. The best part of this is the face, really. Simplify is my suggestion. A big graphic face.

I'd modify the hand on this if I knew how to modify submissions...(the 4 on here are my first tries with this).

Besides that- thank you all for the comments & critiques.

By the by, jonsimonsen- the rose is NOT clip art. It's created from scratch, right down to the screen.

verry cool the balance of colors real nice the ilustration but the hand i cant undestand the way its the hand move or something like that
but its cool the colors....

art is great--but I also wouldn't wear it. 4 for art!

this shirt rocks my socks off! my mom would wear that.....strange.

ok, it's nicely drawn, but for fucks sake! what is that hand doing?! i've figured it out now, but at first sight, it looks terribly deformed. her middle and index fingers are really hard to read. try making the middle finger go the same direction as the index. it looks like her middle finger is broken. also maybe if you gave more definitiion to the thumb it would read better. otherwise, i really like it.

Crazy hand, beautiful design.

trying to use sex as a weapon: -0

love the art, dont know about on a shirt.

Maybe use other colors and try refining the fingers so they don't look weird...

nice design, wouldn't want to wear it though.

I liked your green one a lot better.

hand looks really weird.

that hand is FUCKED up. otherwise, cool!

NO, no...keep the hand...but adjust it to where it would look like she's pinching the wearers nipple....hehehe...yeah, do it! Oh...I don't like the Rose...kind of cheesy...i don't know..but the girl is hot.

Aside from the mangled robot hand, I love it.


Oh, and the gradient. The gradient has got to go.