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breathe again

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Jan 06 '05
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2.03 from 1,566 votes
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Samantha1981
Samantha1981 on Jan 06 '05
tenenbaum
tenenbaum on Jan 06 '05
toni braxton song inspired?
fev3r_d0g
fev3r_d0g on Jan 06 '05
looks like something i would see in hollisters racks
omniscient
omniscient on Jan 06 '05
Sorry to say too generic for me. Maybe somemore depth. The idea is there just need to pull it together.
themeekshall
themeekshall on Jan 06 '05
a swan attacked me once, brings back bad memories
HelloLovelySun
HelloLovelySun on Jan 06 '05
Reminds me of a salvation army, but not bad.
cutefriend1984
cutefriend1984 on Jan 06 '05
It needs some more color.
McLemore
McLemore on Jan 06 '05
A 70's Jonathan Livingtston Seagull design...I never liked that book cover even in the 70's and, yes, I'm old enough to remember the 70's.
deralte
deralte on Jan 06 '05
Sorry, i don't know toni braxton. But i want used irony...
smashmethod
smashmethod on Jan 06 '05
Too boring for my tastes.



"Fly away home."
dreah
dreah on Jan 06 '05
ah i like
Datchiki
Datchiki on Jan 06 '05
bit boring but it can leave the imagination to wander. i don't mind it
skarinja
skarinja on Jan 06 '05
I like the simplicity of it.
Haranator
Haranator on Jan 06 '05
Needs a bit more fresh air.
1stepforward
1stepforward on Jan 06 '05
awww Hollister! how cute.
idnarb23
idnarb23 on Jan 06 '05
i love it.. so emo
prof. hijinx
prof. hijinx on Jan 07 '05
I like it. I think I'd like it better without the text.
Laszlito
Laszlito on Jan 07 '05
coool !!!!
Redo
Redo on Jan 07 '05
it's a bit stiff. maybe a little coloring wouldn't hurt.
the_alpaca
the_alpaca on Jan 07 '05
what means that my design is "pending" ?
girlsworstfear
girlsworstfear on Jan 07 '05
I like it but feel I've seen it somewhere else before. Maybe tweak the bird silhouette/outline thing some.
BatmanKissMe
BatmanKissMe on Jan 07 '05
looing for the liney type of design..well this is too...liney. Maybe fill somethign in
garbagekid33
garbagekid33 on Jan 07 '05
oooo .. i like this

absolut
absolut on Jan 07 '05
not sure if i would wear this, seems a little too plain of a design for my taste, and not exactly the most clear idea either. :/
Reconfine
Reconfine on Jan 07 '05
i dont really feel this one. seems too boring?
T.S.
T.S. on Jan 07 '05
faaantastic! :D
MahiMahiHead24
MahiMahiHead24 on Jan 08 '05
Like the design...simple, old school....but something's missing...kind of boring?
nahnah_
nahnah_ on Jan 08 '05
It reminded me of a tampon advert...
ottonomy
ottonomy on Jan 08 '05
Why is the "aga" a different color?
porcelain_line_art
porcelain_line_art on Jan 08 '05
ahhh, these other people are crap if they don't like it.

threadless sometimes confuses me on what becomes shirts.

and then i see really good submissions yet people are too :

"there aren't seventeen colours on it."

"where are the tear/rain drops?"

to realize simplicity is good sometimes.

so though it might not make it, good job.
My name is Broken
My name is Broken on Jan 08 '05
A shirt about breaking away, who could ask for more? I like the cloud of of the line, and the way the bird moves seemlessly through the shirt. I dig it.
ltjrulesallandyousuck
ltjrulesallandyousuck on Jan 08 '05
i think its pretty cool. very simple, but yet still very different. definatly like.
mmmmike
mmmmike on Jan 09 '05
take all the text off
cgay24
cgay24 on Jan 09 '05
it's a nice design. simple. and i'd wear it, only i probably wouldn't buy it. it seems so simple that i'd be willing to make that on my own.
kiyomsturr
kiyomsturr on Jan 09 '05
does it come in any other colors?
passion69
passion69 on Jan 09 '05
very woody and warm feeling...nice
Skepticism
Skepticism on Jan 10 '05
Very, very simple. Nice though.
cHolmes
cHolmes on Jan 10 '05
thanks for all the comments so far.



this was something i whipped up one night about a year ago. i just discovered threadless and figured i'd put it up to see what people thought. i agree with everyone who says its a little plain, but i wanted an intentionally simplistic look to it when i made it. the 'aga' is in a different color to subtly switch the text to also say "breathe in" .



although the bright blue/white color scheme was my original take, i could also see this printed in tan or gray ink on either a burgandy or forrest green shirt.
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