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Sep 21 '10
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YaaH
   YaaH on Sep 21 '10
5
mirisch
mirisch on Sep 21 '10
Great idea and good looking!!!
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 21 '10
lets see how many times I can abuse the day and night theme
randyotter3000
   randyotter3000 on Sep 21 '10
looks like the rough stage of a design, could of actually been a decent tee if you took the time to drawing things properly
MadCobra
   MadCobra on Sep 21 '10
exellent i would wear it $$$$$$$$$
silverqe
   silverqe on Sep 21 '10
I think it's a really incredible idea that definitely needs some work in terms of execution. Really is a fantastic concept though; you should definitely go poke buko if you need a collab partner for this (if it's not picked up as is).
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 21 '10
well since your already the second comment to tell me this needs more work it probably wont get picked up but thanks for the advice
Mrcoffeebean
Mrcoffeebean on Sep 21 '10
nice!
soloyo
soloyo on Sep 21 '10
very clever!
xXBernardoXx
xXBernardoXx on Sep 21 '10
Very creative =D
Mosquito88
Mosquito88 on Sep 21 '10
Love the idea!
alexmdc
   alexmdc on Sep 21 '10
I agree dude the concept is awesome! but I do think it needs some small refinements as well, wouldnt be surprised if they still printed it tho
Plu Shu
Plu Shu on Sep 21 '10
I love your stuff generally speaking, but honestly, the cracks could use some bettering, and the mix of pure black VS blue sky and sun and clouds (Skydiver and all the look-alikes) is tiring me a bit.
Doesn't mean I don't like it, but more that you can do a lot better ;)
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 21 '10
I cant think of any other way to repent day :(
Plu Shu
Plu Shu on Sep 21 '10
Sorry!
Don't worry though, no big deal. Plus I'm sure it will be liked anyway.
Bisparulz
   Bisparulz on Sep 21 '10
great effect. 5$
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 21 '10
represent
ANCU
ANCU on Sep 21 '10
if you rework it, try to keep the already existing contrast and clearness of night shatters
dschwen
   dschwen on Sep 21 '10
Sweet!
MissMiltenburg
MissMiltenburg on Sep 21 '10
people with a moon on their designs unite!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/298213/Foxx
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 21 '10
lets form megazord
cmdixon2
   cmdixon2 on Sep 21 '10
I did a design much like this a couple of years ago for a Woot derby.
http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=23962

I do like your contrast better though. Makes it more wearable. Definitely rework and sub it for critique first.

Good luck!
kooky love
   kooky love on Sep 21 '10
GREAT $5
pexatar
pexatar on Sep 22 '10
Good Job!

If you like, tell me what do you think of my work: HEARTBIT
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 22 '10
Wednesday bump
dfurman
dfurman on Sep 22 '10
very cool 5
thechild
   thechild on Sep 22 '10
looks sweet on the shirt
Zen Studio
Zen Studio on Sep 23 '10
kewl!
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 23 '10
Thursday bump
HorsefaceDee
   HorsefaceDee on Sep 23 '10
really cool!!!
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 24 '10
Friday bump
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 25 '10
not a single comment today
greenttentacle
greenttentacle on Sep 26 '10
coool!!
SuperRyan
SuperRyan on Sep 26 '10
damn

nice work
EN AJUSTES
EN AJUSTES on Sep 27 '10
Reminds me of a Korn video. I dig it.
Aaron.Randy
Aaron.Randy on Sep 27 '10
looks great 5$!
gaflamingo
gaflamingo on Sep 27 '10
I really love this. The crack does look a bit like a steer skull though. Revise that center shape and it will be perfect!
biotwist
   biotwist on Sep 27 '10
thanks, monday bump
Skap 1er
Skap 1er on Sep 27 '10
if thy print this they'll probably leave out the moon ;)
wyverngirl
wyverngirl on Sep 28 '10
Hello biotwist! Very cool idea! Maybe the missing element people are trying to put their fingers on is that it would look even better if the black broken edges of the night sky had more dimension. Give it a bit of thickness in a lighter color like gray and use some gradients in the edge. Just a suggestion!
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