thanks for critics...

Would look much better without that title like that and with more grunge on it.

Nice collors!!!

Is this supposed to look like a Kohl's shirt or was that by mistake?

looks good and professional,
but it's a little too "i-got-this-at-the-mall" for me.

good idea. too "mall-like" no need for the text... makes it look like it's from Old Navy or the Gap. no date, we know when that kinda skate look came from. and no splatters either... that's one way to get someone to think, "oh not another one!" Tweak this and I'll buy!

my son would kick my ass in 10 year for giving him that tshirt

i think its swell... no swolen.. myass is swolen

i would like it better without the "oldschool" and without the Brutal logos.

reminds me of AE

no text. i agree with krstendavenport, looks like AE

i agree with krstendavenport and malcaroni

Lose ALL the text.

....ok.

if you actually skate then you have no excuse for this design, if you don't skate then don't bother trying to capitalize on its current state of popularity cause you are clearly lost

yeah lose text and white background

hmmm... it's cute