good idea. too "mall-like" no need for the text... makes it look like it's from Old Navy or the Gap. no date, we know when that kinda skate look came from. and no splatters either... that's one way to get someone to think, "oh not another one!" Tweak this and I'll buy!
if you actually skate then you have no excuse for this design, if you don't skate then don't bother trying to capitalize on its current state of popularity cause you are clearly lost
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