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Take out the text. The hate is implied in the knots, the text complicated the presentation and overstates the point.
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I'd buy it if the heart was scribbley and detailed around the edges...and you dont really need the text, Ican see that its love and hate, but alot of people like that.
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ever seen puppet ballet or one of the ten billion heart submissions? i would go for a less overdone concept.
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