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Cool concept and nice style.
The corner of the couch at the bottom seems a little weird. Make that just square. I think you did the same with the other back corner, cause otherwise it'd stick out a little above the left leg where the pants is at. Further more I'd say make the waves fit more with the style you got going with the couch. You could do that by adding some linework (which has the same style as the couch and the guy) in the waves. You could make all your linework blue to make it more fit as a whole. Also add some tiny splashes around the couch and a tale of splashes behind the couch like this & this. Also the wave closest/around the couch looks good, but the other ones look off and less detailed. Maybe turn the couch with the surfer on it and that closest wave as a whole a bit clockwise. The 2 pillows seem to have way thicker lines around them. I'd say make those the same thickness as the rest so they want stand out so much. |
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Oops! I only just now realize this isn't a crit since I came back for maybe a new version. I thought so because you posted the link in my crit. Sorry...
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