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I find it a bit bland, but the sketchy style is definitely good stuff. Maybe with some more plain dark areas, or some contrast, it'd feel more solid, imo. Do keep subbing this kind of pieces, please.
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The style works, even if as En Ajustes said you can certainly go darker in some places. Regarding the design in itself, well, the concept/general feeling is "ok, not bad, but not great".
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I LOVE the way purple looks on that yellow. Looks like the drawings we would make during class, of the notebook margins... It's so 5.
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Funny, sometimes lately your concepts get duller when the corresponding visual experiments get all the more impressive!
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