the art is great but the execution could be improved. the composition sort of confuses me. is it supposed to be the kid's birthday or the Joker's? why is the sign on the cake? is it a rental cake? there could be more magic tricks or balloon sculptures in the background.
Great idea, but needs some work. The sign being on the table doesn't make much sense. Instead, have something like a van with "Mr. J's Clown Rental" obviously spray painted on the side or something in the background. Also, the lines in the table cloth really draw the eye to bottom, so either it needs to fade or be framed.
Haragos
For his birthday... Billy's mom got him a Party Clown that is very fond of magic tricks involving pencils. Happy Birthday Billy!
SpeedyQuik
ohhh gosh this is soo terrible. but so funny!
SR2010
awesome! brilliant concept!
makatha
nice
mynameissarah
Aah, that's pretty awesome, 5$
SteveOramA
terrible and not terrible. it's one of those conflicting feelings that causes a person to score this high.
GnoyVanNdaroe The 2nd
I really like JOKER.. SUPER $5 from me dude..
ran1984
nice!
Fablucero
haha nice!
ephemeris
lol, trick or treat 4$
FRICKINAWESOME
You horrible cruel bastard.
:)
I'm being not so serious. Awesome work.
sausage_moe
ergh... poor little billy. still a great design even though i'm not into torture:)
Mrcoffeebean
Nice!!
YaaH
4
Stile
Christopher Nolan would be proud! Funny, funny stuff!
Efunk2332
nice and simple, but i dont like how the colors in the table cloth just end and dont really fade or anything
adamk711
i want to see him make it disappear
hopwood20
I'm loving it! I wish I had a clown for my b-day!
padrejustin
Great idea! I love this design!
Luigi Mario
Mama mia! Thisa funny!
NGee
Wanna see it disappear?
Pixieli
clever
thegoodpope
I like the whole childrens book style of it.
TheMSG
Best birthday ever!
nickv47
lmao. awesome.
Bio-bot 9000
the art is great but the execution could be improved. the composition sort of confuses me. is it supposed to be the kid's birthday or the Joker's? why is the sign on the cake? is it a rental cake? there could be more magic tricks or balloon sculptures in the background.
Haragos
thanks for the comments, good or bad!
kiiarella
great work
ravonia13
Great idea, but needs some work. The sign being on the table doesn't make much sense. Instead, have something like a van with "Mr. J's Clown Rental" obviously spray painted on the side or something in the background. Also, the lines in the table cloth really draw the eye to bottom, so either it needs to fade or be framed.
lilweirdo
hahaha take THAT Billy!
eQuivalent
nice :)
murraymullet
nice :)
AdderXYU
Why is he holding a pencil and giving the devil-horns. Is he writing a setlist for the Dimmu Borgir Birthday Bash?
thespence
hahaha! funny and clever!
please check out my design
dfurman
great! 5 it
charity.ryan
ha love the pencil trick! fun! $
Tunderous
can we just skip voting and print this one?
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