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The stars are sort of cliché, but your composition is tight and the draftsmanship is impressive. Spare the lyrics, though. PLEASE.
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yeah good job on the linework. i just hope its thick enough. hard to tell with out a closeup to compare it with.
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really lke the image but the shirt colours r pretty shit the only half nice one uv chosen is the navy
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a heavier line weight would push this over the top... also, maybe more color on the stars, sort of a venn diagram effect?
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work on the lines, they are a little too much on the light side and maybe lightly color in the stars like one yellow, one red and orange where it overlaps.
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i don't like the color of the lines of the stars cuz they don't really match with each other but i totally heart the rest
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nipple shot
copy + paste http://www.slowshirts.com/shop/asp/popuplargeimage.asp?Item_Image=<img+src="../images_products_large/110.jpg">&Item_Parent=Projector&Item_Title=%20(SHIRTS) |
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thicken the lines...otherwise this is awesome. i like the light blue and maybe the colors of the stars need to stand out more.
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I dont see thepint in posting the lyrics, if you wear the shirt I'd be damned if I recited that gibber gabber to everyone that thought to ask...huh? whats that mean"... I give it a 3...
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In the last second of life, they're gonna show you how
How they run this show, sure, run it into the ground
The stars are projectors, yeah
Projectin' our lives down to this planet Earth
The stars are projectors, yeah
Projectin'our minds down to this planet Earth
Everyone wants a double feature
They wanna be their own damn teacher, and how
All the stars are projectors, yeah
Projectin' our lives down to this planet Earth
It's all about moderate climates
You gotta be cold and be hot for sure
It's all about the moderate climates
You wanna be blessed and be cursed for sure
All the stars are projectors, yeah
Projectin' our lives down to this planet Earth (x2)
Everyone wants a double feature
They want to be in their own damn teacher, and how
All the stars are projectors, yeah
Projectiní our lives down to this planet Earth
You've got the harder part, You've got the kinder heart
And itís true
I've got the easy part, I've got the harder heart
Aint this true
Right wing, left wing, chicken wing
It's built on findiní the easier ways through
God is a woman and the woman is
An animal that animals man, and that's you
Was there a need for creation?
That was hiden in a math equation
And that's thisÖ
WHERE DO CIRCLES BEGIN?
-Isaac Brock